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What is your opinion?

Ruthless

"Very organised story line. Amazing chara ters and love plot."

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Martina Belovická

"jedním slovem super čtení"

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ruthless lord

"nice"

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Please continue to write

"This is an interesting story, well written so far. The plot could continue in so many directions. It would be interesting for me, as an avid reader, to see in which direction you navigate the story. Thanks for the the time you have taken to write the few chapters and I look forward to reading more from you. Sincerely "

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Where are the remaining chapters?🥹🫠

"Waiting patiently 🥹"

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I love where this is going

"Hopefully, we get more of the story. I see it hasn’t been updated in a while but what little there is I did enjoy. Thank you for sharing."

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Not finished

"It is very disappointing for readers to find out that story is uploaded unlisted. Only 4 chapters. It is waste of our time."

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Incomplete book

"Please complete the book."

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Update?

"Why hasn't this story had an update in so long?"

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Exciting

"All they want is peace and quiet to raise a Family and politics ruins it all. Looking forward to Reading on!! "

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Exciting

"All they want is peace and quiet to raise a Family and politics ruins it all. Looking forward to Reading on!! "

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Exciting

"All they want is peace and quiet to raise a Family and politics ruins it all. Looking forward to Reading on!! "

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Lovely story

"Looking forward to book 2. Beautiful love story. Thank you "

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