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The Bound
"I like the suspenseful plot. Hoping for more chapters soon. I want to find out what the boundaries are about."
promising start ❤️
"The opening chapters are atmospheric, capturing Salem’s eerie charm, but feel scattered—many introductions and loose threads leave me curious how the plot will tighten."
Not Compelling
"Carrie - You have a wonderful style in describing settings, but I think that type of content is overdone. I read your first three chapters and have no idea what the plot may be, or where it's headed. Suggest you need to get to an event, a problem a threat or some conflict very early in the book. I needed a reason to want to learn more, to read more - but it just isn't there now. "
