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PIECES OF SLUMBER

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Summary

Sometimes, when the night is quiet enough, we can still feel it. Like a memory knocking softly, asking if we can still remember everything inside our dreams. The fragments. The quiet thoughts. Even the adventurous wonders. We linger in them, hoping our dreams will lead us somewhere enchanting. We dream. We imagine. We wander into the great abyss—getting lost inside our own Dreamland. The stories we are meant to hold are meant to be written. Each one carries its own tale, its own chapter. And as a dreamer longing to remember, I wrote this for you— to immerse yourself, and to join me inside my dream.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
30
Rating
5.0 1 review
Age Rating
16+

PROLOGUE

Falling into an unknown void—space or place—yet the moment you see it, everything feels familiar. Like an old home, or a school you once knew, embracing your memories and unfolding them into another dimension. Being in two places at once becomes possible there, and that alone feels like an adventure.

Sometimes it’s terrifying. Sometimes it’s enchanting. And sometimes—utterly worth it.

You meet people you’ve never encountered before, yet feel an immediate familiarity toward them, as if you’ve known them your whole life. Their presence lingers—warm, recognizable—even without a name or a past.

You move with abilities you never question: flying, teleporting, bending space itself. What would be impossible while awake becomes effortless. Natural. Ordinary.

Because once you surrender to deep sleep, everything becomes normal.

And you dream.

Dreaming… it is like stepping into somewhere special—somewhere your own world can exist exactly as you imagine it. A place where imagination takes shape and becomes real.

Even Alice, lost in her Wonderland, found meaning in her journey. Her world was a gift to the mind of a child yearning for adventure, where curiosity led the way and wonder had no limits. And then there was Little Nemo, wandering through Slumberland—a realm overflowing with imagination. Even his nightmares chased him awake, haunting him just enough to pull him back to reality.

But they never stopped dreaming.

And neither do we.

Even as we grow older, we still dream. We still hope to lose ourselves in our own Wonderland—to wander through our own Slumberland once more.

And me?

I have my own. I have my own dreams. And I, too, have my own Dreamland.

I have a place I can call my own. And even if it exists only in dreams, it feels real to me. I have my nightmares, my premonitions—my stories waiting to be told.

As I dive into that world, I let myself drown in imagination. There, I can fall into something strange—something enchanting, or even terrifying. I can meet people. I can fall in love.

Inside my dreams, everything is possible.

All I need is to set my mind free— or simply let the dream take control.

Since childhood, my mind has been filled with imagination—dreams that carried me to extraordinary places. But as I grew older, something within me began to change. And with it, my dreams changed too.

My dreamland shifted. Transformed.

And it scares me.

That is why I want to write them now—so I can remember them again, so I can reminisce, or perhaps, one day, return to them in my sleep.

My Dreamland. The enchanted forest. The abandoned town. My favorite part of the sea. Even the mansion I once lived in.

They are slowly shifting, slowly being replaced. The mysterious ruins and enchanted waterfalls fade away, giving way to a long, weary road… and our old house.

I even stopped dreaming about that house—the one that once waited for me. The man in the attic. The shifting stairwell.

All of it slowly disappeared.

I want to remember them again—one by one— before I learn to embrace the new world forming inside my dreams.

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author

This reads more like a meditative reflection on dreams than a story opening, which gives it a calm, almost poetic tone. The idea of a personal “Dreamland” changing over time is interesting and has emotional potential.

Right now, though, it stays very general for too long, lots of broad statements about dreaming without a clear, concrete moment or image to anchor the reader. The references (Alice, Nemo) are nice, but they slightly pull focus away from your unique dream world. The strongest part is near the end, where specific details appear (the attic, the shifting stairwell), that’s where it starts to feel vivid and personal.

The concept is compelling, but it would be stronger if you introduced specific imagery and a clearer narrative voice earlier to ground the reader.

If you’d like, I can go deeper on sharpening the opening hook, reducing generalization, and turning this into a more immersive, story-driven prologue. Looking forward to your response!

4 months
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author

It's a good read, but the prolific use of em dashes is off putting while reading. 😊✍️✍️

3 months
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author

Ominous this sudden shifting to nightmares. I wonder what's going on with the narrator. Is she in danger? 🫢

2 months
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