What is your opinion?
Not as dark as I thought, but writing is wow
"I love how you open every jasmine part. It instantly sets me in her mood. This is different in many ways. I love broody mmc, but Enkor flirting with her and her responses are gold. I love how you write single line detail in chapters that connect in later chapters. Ice rain scene lives in my mind rent free. Writing style is harsh in a good way, I love it when authors let readers connect the dots. I love the characters more than the plot. Please write book2 soon."
Sold to Alien Lord
"Great romance, and well-written. I am looking forward to reading more chapters."
Alien lust
"I'm really enjoying this story. The characters are really developed and the story line and plot holds my attention and interest. "
Please continue 🙏 I can't wait to finish this story!💕
"What a great story so far! I too love the back and forth banter between them! This story has the bones to be an epic love story! I feel it! Please don't give up on it🥹It's so beautifully written and well crafted. I will await patiently for It's continuance ❤️💜💕"
Romance First Plot
"This is romance first plot. Dark Romance . Not Gentle. Dub-con. He owns her. She hates that her body responds to him."
Hmmmm...
"This started off really good, and I was really interested. Then it shifted and started to get really confusing, like information was missing, and I wasn't sure what was happening any longer. I don't love all the single sentence paragraphs either. "
