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Summary

A Diary, A Murder, LOVE and a case that would risk her life.

Genre
Drama
Author
zannus
Status
1d ago
Chapters
35
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

first murder

16 SEPTEMBER

I called an uber fast because I had a party. I got ready fast and went to the location of the party. I reached Infront of the apartment, I saw a big crowd there circling something. I ran towards the crowd to see what was all the fuss about. There I saw a girl bleeding I got shocked. I got closer to check if she was someone I knew, I was shocked and frightened at the same time it was Emily the host of the party and one of my close friends. I got stressed and panicked. I started to cry but I knew it was not the time to cry, I called her brother immediately. We got her to the hospital. The doctor came out after a few hours, doctor: I am sorry! She’s no longer with us. You were too late. I called her other friends and relatives and told them the news. Her brother gave me a note. Emily’s brother: I-I-It had your na-name in it. He said crying. I calmed him down and took the note and shoved into my pocket. I called Shiloh and others. we all set upped the funeral arrangements. I booked a train ticket for Emily’s parents. the funeral went smoothly, I guess! We all gathered in a hotel to eat because we haven’t eaten since morning and its 12’0’ clock now. we called Emily’s brother but he said he didn’t want to come. We didn’t force him. I went home after dinner. I finished my chores fast and was about to sleep when I remembered the note Emily wrote for me. I opened the note it said “DEAR lily, I’ve been meaning to tell you something. I have been having a habit of news reading lately because my therapist told me to.one day I read a news about a girl who was found dead in her balcony. I ignored the news but the next day I again read a news about a girl found dead near a park. the new were similar and they both were in collage and were under 20. I felt something strange about it and thought I could ask you to dig more about it. since you have a master brain in solving cases”. After reading the note I cried a lot and decided to dig more into this news and see if there is anything strange in it. For Emily

17 SEPTEMBER

Today was the first day of my collage after holiday. I got up early and made breakfast for my mom and dad, I made Indian food “butter chicken and nan”. They both loved it. I am so happy that my parents love what I cook for them. I ate break fast and packed myself a lunch. I changed into my dress and went to college .me and Shiloh were in the same class as always. we became friends with a girl named Kate. She was a kind hearted girl. We studied a lot and got bored. After a whole three classes we went to lunch. we sat with our brothers during lunch. Elijah was Shiloh’s brother and liam was my brother. I asked Shiloh and others for help to solve this case. Shiloh and I became and an expert in these solving mystery kinds of things. So, after school we all went to officer billy. me and Shiloh told him about this and he said he’d help by giving the crime scene photos. We went to Kate’s house for investigating. I checked the crime scene photos of both girls from the newspaper. They both had same bruises and marks. Shiloh told me to check Emily’s crime scene photo. When I checked it, Emily had the same wound and mark as the other two girls.so the three of them was murdered. Elijah: but why did the killer kill Emily when she was above 20 not under. ME: you’re right Eli. We thought about it for a few minutes. Taylor: what if the killer thought that Emily giving us the paper would be a problem because we might figure out who he/she is. I pinned the Taylor’s point in the bulletin board. We looked into the case till 6 pm. I was so tired; I drank my emergency strawberry milk. ME: wait if the killer killed Emily for the reason Taylor told then why was the paper in her hand. I pinned the confusion to the board. Everyone decided to stay in my place because tomorrow was a study leave. I know my schools weird the school just opened and there is a test we have to study for.


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