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Absolutely loved

"I never thought I would really get into a dragon book until this one. The character are well developed, the plot is interesting and amazing. The whole book just makes you not want to stop reading. I can’t wait for the next book, I wanna see where this amazing thought process goes and where the main characters end up. This is more than just average fantasy books, this is an incredible imagination and thinking process. "

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Excellent read!

"Characters, plot, descriptions. All excellent. A thoroughly enjoyable read. Highly recommend. Thank you. "

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Love!

"Love love love. The story and the characters are fab. I love anything to do with dragons and magic so this is right up my alley. Hope to read the next one soon!!!"

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Wow

"I..... never write reviews. Ever. And you can tell from my badges that I read on here.... A LOT, like probably an unhealthy amount. But reviews? I just don’t think about it. However..... this? This?? Fantastic. Very few plot holes (the ones that are there are just minimal mixups and not actually plot holes). Kept me interested the entire time. Read it in less than a day desperately hoping a second book was started and now I have to wait and find out when/if there’s a second one. Seriously so good. Would give more than 5 stars if it was possible. "

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Very good plot

"Really enjoyed the plot and the characters. My only suggestion is read through the chapters after using AI. In the first couple hundred pages it contradicted itself here and there but not horribly. Later after page 460 it starts to use more word fluff where it repeats things constantly. We do not need reminding over and over that she survived certain things i will not name cause i dont want to ruin it for people, as well as the main character constantly asking her friend when she became so wise. BUT for the most part except some chapters in the middle, i found the book really keeps you engaged. Btw love the little sister, but her friend gives horrible advice. I dont feel she had any trouble with the camping, testing and bonding part which was amped up to be this really difficult task people die during yet as someone dying, she didnt have a single issue. I think it could have used more in that scene. "

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