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It worth the time, and will not be forgotten in my mind.

"I'm not a great critic, not even a 'beta' reader -- just another 'common' reader. I'll also try to avoid spoilers. The plot is solid. Its consistency is strong -- something you don't find very often. The story's flow carries you from the beginning to the end of the novel quite well, and I didn't notice any fillers in there. But one thing, I personally would prefer to read it as a book, not like a web novel. It might be my fault (partially or not don't know), but at times it feels like you have to go back to get back on track. It isn't a full recap, but it creates that same effect. As for the characters, honestly, I didn't get attached to any of them. But that's not necessarily a bad thing for this story -- it's actually a strong side of it. My opinion is that adding more character-focused lines could blur the story's main idea/focus or plot itself. Overall, I read a lot of sci-fi, and many of the stories I've read have faded from my memory or been completely forgotten. This one, however, will stay with me -- not because of the characters, but because of the story itself. Hopefully my review is useful. Thanks! PS yep, there is still a room to argue about technologies and time frames in the novel, but when it isn't ... "

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