What is your opinion?
Just finished Chapter 2
"Chapter 1 pulled me in fast. You can feel the pressure on Chip right away with the rival QB situation. The family moments were honestly my favorite part because they made him feel like a real kid, not just “football guy.” And that dream plus countdown at the end had me thinking, okay I’m definitely reading Chapter 2. Only thing is the middle drags a bit, and I kept waiting for a hint of the medical secret sooner. Chapter 2 gets messy in the best way. The Tess talk is uncomfortable and tense, but it feels real. Chip thinking “football is easier than relationships” is painfully relatable. Also the vibe at Tess’s house with the calls and her dad showing up felt off in a good suspense way. I just wish the conversation was tighter because it circles the same point, and I wanted one more small clue about what is actually going on."
Wow!!!
"Can’t wait to see where this story goes!!"
Good story
"Liked the story, it was good"
