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Feel like family

"Strong family and friendship feels. Nice to read about so much love. Thank you for letting us experience it."

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I enjoyed the read!

"I enjoyed the story and all the different characters very much especially Vance. To me some repetitive details were a bit too much for my taste, all the talk about snacks and chocolate was to often and that every interaction with Donnie had him rolling his eyes. Even if he does, the reader gets it at some point. Although the female main character is great, she is too much of a saint. 😇"

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