What is your opinion?
Certainly has a good appeal
"This one is sucking me in like a good book. The characters and the situations have already got an emotional investment, and I want to know more. So get writing, polish your craft, and add more chapters to this so we can find out what is going on in this world you've crafted."
The Ruzir Sphere
"I felt that mother’s desperation in my soul! I’m excited for future chapters. "
Love the punchy one-liners!
""I was still in cry sleep!" kept me reading! I'm really enjoying the punchy, witty, one-liner dialogue. I also appreciate the amount of description. I enjoy leaving things to the imagination but I also appreciate an author who helps us see their vision so we as the reader can properly follow along."
Just Amazing
"This is probably the best thing I have ever put my eyes into this book and wonder what the hell could this go it is so great I can't wait for more chapters. Keep up the good work GamerFox out."



