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Certainly has a good appeal

"This one is sucking me in like a good book. The characters and the situations have already got an emotional investment, and I want to know more. So get writing, polish your craft, and add more chapters to this so we can find out what is going on in this world you've crafted."

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The Ruzir Sphere

"I felt that mother’s desperation in my soul! I’m excited for future chapters. "

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Love the punchy one-liners!

""I was still in cry sleep!" kept me reading! I'm really enjoying the punchy, witty, one-liner dialogue. I also appreciate the amount of description. I enjoy leaving things to the imagination but I also appreciate an author who helps us see their vision so we as the reader can properly follow along."

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Just Amazing

"This is probably the best thing I have ever put my eyes into this book and wonder what the hell could this go it is so great I can't wait for more chapters. Keep up the good work GamerFox out."

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