The girl who feels too much

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Summary

In a world where emotions are power, silence is a curse. ‎Everyone awakens magic through feeling. Anger burns, love heals, grief destroys. ‎But Elowen feels too much — or so everyone believes. ‎Born sensitive in a realm ruled by passion, Elowen has always struggled to hide her feelings. Until the day her emotions start to manifest in ways no one can control… threatening everything she loves. ‎And when the world begins to notice, being the girl who feels too much might be the greatest danger of all.

Genre
Fantasy/Drama
Author
Lulu_a
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
4
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

‎The Girl Who Felt Too Much

‎They said I was born too sensitive.

‎Not broken. Not cursed. Just… too much.

‎In Aurelian, emotions are not private. They are magic. Anger ignites fire, joy brightens the skies, grief twists the earth. Everyone awakens power through what they feel. Everyone, except me. Or so I thought.

‎By the time I was six, I learned to hide it. A soft smile when required. A lowered gaze when emotions surged around me like storms I could not control. I watched people, memorized their rhythms, their fears, their joys. I learned to be invisible in plain sight.

‎But feeling too much is dangerous.

‎At night, when the city slept and the hum of magic softened, I could sense it—the storm of everyone else’s emotions, flowing, alive, untamed. Beneath it all, a pulse in me throbbed, demanding release, and I had nowhere to pour it.

‎Until the night it broke.

‎It started with laughter, floating from the streets below. A girl’s delight, bright and wild, cutting through the quiet of my room. My chest tightened, my hands trembled, and the walls shivered as if the city itself noticed. I tried to still it, tried to convince myself I was fine.

‎“I’m too much,” I whispered, the words tasting like ash.

‎The air answered back.

‎A crack ran across the floorboards. A flicker of light danced across the ceiling. My breath caught, not from fear, but from the realization that I could no longer hide.

‎I had always been the quiet observer, the careful watcher. The girl who felt too much and learned to tuck it away. But now… my emotions were escaping, bending the world around me in ways I did not understand.

‎I sank to the floor, pressing my palms to the wood, willing the trembling to stop. The room was still, almost peaceful, but I could feel it—like sparks under my skin. Like a storm waiting to explode.

‎Outside, the city slept, unaware of the tiny tremors that had shaken my room. But I knew. I had always known.

‎The girl who felt too much could not stay hidden forever. And for the first time in my life, I wondered if anyone could survive knowing the real me.

‎Because I was no longer just sensitive. I was dangerous.

‎And tonight, danger had found its voice.