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Fractured innoncence

"The character did not do enough investigation on the daughter knowing what kind of man he was dealing with. His plan was right but he should have known that the father loved no one even his family. The character said she looked innocent but never considered her as a war victim too.Revenge can be a double sword author a good story to write about."

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