Cool idea

"I read the prologue, and I like what you have going with the basic storyline, but I found it kind of confusing. In the first scene, I wasn't sure if the baby had just been born and if Kate was the mother, and I don't quite understand why and what is coming after the baby. I think that this was kind of rushed. Maybe if it was slowed down with a little more description it would become clearer. Although, maybe you were trying to be vague to intrigue the reader? I liked the basic idea of the story, and it did draw me, I just found it a little clunky in presentation. It definitely has potential though. Good work!"