From A Reader's Perspective

"(SPOILER ALERT) Commanders Of The Galaxy is full of excitement, intrigue, action, and drama, and Synapse is no different. From the very beginning, I was left speculating about what had happened to Kaylee, and what exactly the link was between Synapse and the rest of the group. Coming up on the scene where Synapse had approached Darren, I had many ideas about what could have happened, ranging anywhere from time-travel to a possible alternate dimension (most likely as my own writings have many elements such as that), but what it really was was something that I didn't actually see coming. Synapse as a clone from Kaylee was simply brilliant in design and it made me connect to that character, quite frankly, more than any other. I felt all of the emotions Synapse was going through, all the way up until the end. The story made me want to read more of it, while at the same time not wanting to go through it all again because of how strong the emotions were. There were a lot of highlights to the story, and it made me want more of it. However, with highlights come problems. Below, I'm going to share with you a list of things I found that seriously need to be addressed and worked out. This comprehensive list contains all of the bad things that I found in Synapse's story. 1. Nothing 2. Natta 3. Zip 4. Zilch 5. Zero Seriously, I tried, but I can't think of anything bad that I could say about it! As I've been writing this, I have analyzed the whole of the story in my head (that I JUST read, mind you) and there's really nothing I hate or even mildly dislike about it. The ONLY reason I didn't give it five stars is because I believe the writer can make something even better than this, and that extra missing star is hope for THAT story, not a critique on this one. So in conclusion, if you're reading this before reading the story, how dare you ignore my spoiler warning! But in all seriousness, just read the story, you WON'T be disappointed, except maybe in that it's a little too short."