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When Vows Were Made In Silence

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Summary

A young couple’s secret vow of love is challenged by betrayal, silence, and the weight of the past. ----------------------------------------- Drawn together by faith and torn apart by doctrine, a young couple’s secret vow shatters under betrayal—only to resurface years later, when wounded adulthood demands a deeper, more costly kind of love.

Genre
Romance
Author
Sunny D
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
31
Rating
5.0 1 review
Age Rating
16+

1.The Edge of Apret

Taram lived where the tarred road surrendered to red dust—at the farthest edge of Apret village, where movement slowed and the world seemed to hesitate.

Beyond that point lay open land and silence, a stretch of earth that smelled of rainless soil and unrealized promise. Life here was unhurried but exacting, predictable yet unforgiving. The sun rose each morning like a stern witness, and days were measured by labor, hunger, and the slow migration of shadows across the cracked walls of mud houses.

He had completed high school months earlier, carrying certificates that felt lighter than they should have been, as though the future they promised had leaked away before he could claim it. With no clear direction, Taram drifted along the margins of his life—restless, uncertain, and driven more by instinct than intention. He owned no great ambitions, only a quiet dissatisfaction that followed him like dust on his skin.

In the evenings, he often sat on the low wall in front of his house, watching village children chase chickens in noisy circles, their laughter rising and falling with the sun. From nearby compounds came the sounds of cooking pots and familiar arguments, of lives settled into patterns that rarely changed. And yet, inside him, something strained against containment. He felt the pull of a wider world—something larger, unnamed, and distant—calling to him from beyond the village boundary.

Taram was not a church boy. Faith, to him, existed as habit rather than conviction: Sunday bells, memorized prayers, voices lifted without expectation. Religion lingered at the edges of his life like background noise—present, but easily ignored. He lived in the now, following impulse, avoiding attachments that threatened to anchor him. Still, beneath his carelessness flickered a sense of anticipation, as though life were gathering itself, preparing to interrupt him.

It did.

On December 26th, 1999, fate chose its moment.

The day arrived bright and clear, the harmattan air sharp enough to make the red dust shimmer like embers beneath the sun. Taram sat outside his house, seeking escape from the stifling quiet indoors. The yard stretched between ancient trees whose roots clawed deep into the earth, as if refusing to let go of the past. Birds nested above, their songs weaving through the air—voices older than the village itself, speaking in rhythms he could not interpret but instinctively felt.

And then he saw her.

Eluan.

She stood by the roadside in effortless stillness, as though she had always belonged to that place. The sunlight rested on her face with deliberate tenderness, illuminating her eyes, tracing the soft curve of her smile. There was nothing hurried about her movement, nothing uncertain. She walked as if the earth recognized her steps, as if the village itself had shifted to make room for her presence.

Taram stopped breathing.

Time faltered. The dust, the trees, the cracked walls behind him faded into irrelevance. All that remained was Eluan—radiant against the ordinariness of Apret, quietly extraordinary.

No one had mentioned her. No rumor had preceded her arrival. She appeared without warning, like a truth he had not known he was searching for. Taram, untrained in the language of longing, understood immediately that something fundamental had changed.

She did not speak at first. Her gaze lingered on the ground, and Taram watched the sunlight dance along her skin. There was a calm about her that unsettled him—not the stillness of innocence, but the composure of someone who had learned how to carry life’s weight without bitterness.

Then she looked up.

Their eyes met, and something passed between them—swift, electric, undeniable. A recognition that startled him into motion. Without thinking, Taram stepped closer, his heart pounding loudly in his chest. Slowly, the world returned: the rustle of leaves, the distant cluck of a hen, the murmur of village life. Yet none of it mattered. Not the dust on his sandals. Not the uncertainty that had long shaped his days. Everything dissolved in her presence.

She spoke softly.

“Hello.”

The word was ordinary, yet it landed with unexpected force, settling deep in his chest.

“Hello,” Taram replied, startled by his own voice, which sounded unfamiliar even to himself.

He wanted to say more—to ask her name, to anchor the moment with words—but language failed him. So he remained silent, allowing the space between them to fill with possibility.

For a long moment, he heard nothing else. His thoughts clung to small details: the way her hair caught the light, the steady rhythm of her breathing, the quiet assurance in her posture. She was not an idea, not a dream, not a story passed down in whispers. She was real—and that reality thrilled him as much as it frightened him.

They stood there, suspended in mutual awareness. Taram sensed that this instant—unremarkable to anyone else—would live within him long after the day had passed. In that shared silence, something unspoken formed. Not love. Not yet. But recognition. The faint outline of futures bending toward one another.

The sun climbed higher, pulling the day forward, but Taram felt caught between worlds—between the life he had known and the one now beckoning. He did not yet know her name, nor what tomorrow would demand of him, but one truth rang clear: he had crossed an invisible threshold.

When he finally turned away, Taram looked back once more. Eluan remained there, serene and luminous, unaware of the quiet earthquake she had stirred within him.

He knew, with a certainty that startled him, that this moment was not an ending. He would return—to her, to this road, to the place where fate had finally noticed him.

The edge of Apret remained unchanged.

Taram did not.

Something had begun—softly, irrevocably—in the sunlight by the road.

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