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"Very intriguing story! I would def read a much fuller story if there was more! I do think the voice of Wepwawet was too nonchalant. He would be great as a dark, broody male... More serious, sexy and commanding when he's with Rebecca. You got the hypnotic part down. Great job ❤️"

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