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I'll be honest — action and worldbuilding are what pull me into a story, and this one had me from the jump.

"The Mindholder worldbuilding is so creative and actually woven into the plot rather than just for decoration. Maddie's voice carried me through — sharp, funny and real. The team dynamic between her, Peter, Beck and Nina also felt genuinely warm. Clean writing, great pacing. Really enjoying this! 🙌"

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Enticing!

"Really enjoy the mixing of fantasy with mafia, along with how the author rolls out new details. The dialogue is both snappy and natural. This has been great so far!"

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