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Great character development in Chapter 7! 👏

""This chapter was a delight to read! ✨ I especially loved the ending where Belle turns Jay's anxiety into a 'mission.' It’s a great piece of character development, showing Jay’s transition from fear to pure, candy-driven determination. The dialogue felt very authentic, and 'The Isle of Tears' arc continues to be very intriguing. Great job on Chapter 7! 👏""

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