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Loved it

"It is so good! I would love to read more of it, its mixed with emotions! :)"

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Loved it

"I came here looking for drama and romance but got hit by emotions instead. I didn’t expect this story to hit me the way it did. What started as quite family drama slowly unfolds into something deeply emotional and beautifully written. Definitely one of the most heartfelt stories I’ve come across here. Loved it so far, looking forward to what comes next."

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WHERE IT ALL BEGAN

"This is a deeply moving story that captures the quiet, heartbreaking reality of a child dealing with grief and trauma. Your writing paints clear, vivid pictures of the characters' emotions, especially the contrast between the family's gentle patience and young Nathan's need for safety. The line "I wasn’t trying to be polite. I was trying to be kept" is beautifully written and stays with the reader long after readin"

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