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Way deeper than I expected

"I thought this would just be another action or riot story, but it was way deeper than I expected. The main guy Sufyan isn’t like typical heroes. He doesn’t just kill everyone — he forgives people. That honestly surprised me. Priya’s story hit me the most. Watching her slowly doubt everything she believed felt very real. Some scenes made me just sit and think. Sometimes the talking parts felt long, but overall it felt mature and emotional. Didn’t feel like it was written by someone our age. Respect."

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This made me unexpectedly emotional

"I don’t usually read war or resistance stories, but this one really touched me. The scenes with the children and the evacuations almost made me cry. Sufyan feels so calm and kind — he feels safe, not scary. Some parts were heavy and serious, but the emotions stayed with me even after finishing. It’s not just entertainment — it actually makes you think."

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