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Amazing slow burn

"The writing is fantastic and the suspense is high - there’s magic, mystery, and it feels like old mythology made modern."

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Love this

"Really cool plot. Kept me hooked and makes me think! so glad the story continued. Can’t wait to see where else this goes! Great writing!!!!!!!!!!"

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