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Masterpiece of an Early Draft

"This is very like her other books and so very unlike them at the same time. It is the best fairytale retelling I’ve ever read bar none. I had to stall my own writing for a day and a half just to know what would become of Bianca. I was not disappointed in any way, shape, or form. Brava, Maestra!"

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A Wonderful Read

"This story is interesting and enjoyable. It has good characters and a meaningful message. I liked how the events developed and would recommend it to others."

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Green Flags and a Cat Lovers fever Dream

"This story appreciates the reader as one who can catch on to the little details. It's beautiful and scary. I love how the base is a fairytale, the Prince is clearly charming, and the stakes are high. There is also Crimson, a representation of all Tomboys, soft and girly on the inside, hard as nails on the outside...literally. I also adore the respect, the author shows towards male characters. They have depth...though one of them could do with a slap here and there. Beautiful Storytelling "

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