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Eidolon Atomic

"It is confusing in places and the author needs to figure out the difference in peace and piece among other words."

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"For those lacking hope and looking for a sci-fi adventure in a world, we can sadly relate to finding your temporary in Eidolon Atomic. Sci-fi has always been a tricky genre for me. I find myself picking and choosing at random what I like and what I am interested in at the moment. I wish that there was something that I could pinpoint and that there was a little more definition but I can say that there are universal emotions and situations that are touched upon. An understandable premise with relatable characters Eidolon Atomic does have the many elements that are important in a sci-fi story. I personally enjoyed the description of the hierarchy using pieces on a chess board. That was a terrific use of something in our world to better understand the specifics of Eidolon Atomic. Playing into some of my most rational and irrational fears of the future, Eidolon builds​ a great story for lovers of the genre."

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