What is your opinion?
The Case Files of Jake Malone
"Enjoyed reading it! It was exciting, intriguing and didn't let me stop till the end :) Good job !"
Great adventure
"Definitely an enjoyable story!!! Highly recommend!! I was captivated!!"
I really injoy reading this book it’s exciting and fun to read
"I’m not actually finished with the whole story but it’s exciting and fun to read i can’t imagine why people haven’t been reading it I would definitely encourage people to read it "
The case files
"I enjoyed reading this novel thoroughly. I wished it to be lengthier. Story could be extendedoverall i loved it. Best of luck to the author. "
THE CASE FILES OF JAKE MALONE
"The writer kept me intrigued which is good. Usually after the first two chapters if it's not going anywhere I'll stop reading it, but this kept me going. It was good. Did it have the shock effect which I look for? No."
The Case Files of Jake Malone
"I enjoyed reading this. The narrative is pacey and draws the reader on and the protagonist is interesting. The writing style is suitably pared back which ensures momentum is maintained. The characters are neatly drawn. I think a ruthless edit could pare back some unnecessary words and phrases - especially dialogue markers. Sometime 'said' is enough. The reader can usually supply the tone from the context or the words. I'd also have a quick look at the first chapter where Grace and your protagonist meet. It's very important to get this right. I'm not sure it quite works yet. Well worth persisting with. Good luck with it. This is the link to my own novel if you have time to take a look. https://www.inkitt.com/stories/thriller/225508"
