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On Dark Waters (The Kraken)

"Holy hell this was a masterpiece. Everything about this was amazing. The dynamic between her and The Kraken was probably my favorite part of this book. I NEED a book 2 of this. This absolutely needs to be a series. "

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Makes you want more

"Definitely well done. Great at creating a reason to keep reading. A tough concept—-a brother abandoning his sister."

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Loved!

"A story I didn't know I needed to read but so happy I did! "

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Unique storylines!

"I’m not through the book yet, but it is so superbly unique, I thought I’d recommend it now. If you enjoy steamy romance, myths, folktales, and cryptids, this is the story for you! "

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Surprising

"Hi! I barely read supernatural stories and never read one about the Kraken. I was in need of a short story to take a break from my own hyperactive mind, and I liked it a lot. Short, powerful, really well written and quick paced. 5 stars well earned! "

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Fabulous

"A fabulous story with action, adventure, spice and more! Well written, fast paced, great characters, wonderful scene setting. A couple of spelling mistakes - taunt that should have been taut a few times, but probably spellcheck/autocorrect doing its thing 🙄 Another great story from this writer - hoping for many more 😁"

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