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My my best friends dad

"Loved everything about it great writing great everything. "

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Subscribe

"Dose not tell me what tire I have to subscribe to keep readying this book already pay ones and wasn’t for this book🤷🏻‍♀️"

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Keeps me on the edge of my seat

"Great book. I really liked it."

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Disappointed!

"I loved the story but was completely disappointed in the ending. As long as that story was and the ending was rushed and crammed into one short chapter. That ending ruined it for me. The ending is the most important part."

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Nshsjsbsnks

"I loved the the way that he was first just being physical but slowly he began to love her protect her get obsessed with her how much he gets worried when anything weird happens with eliana . But the fact that both of them knew that they were doing wrong with serena tho "

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Update

" Cant wait for more"

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Intensed

"I like where the story is going as it is getting quite intense. I would most definitely recommend it to some of my friends and family. "

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Amazing

"Eliana really needs to learn to stand up for herself and have a backbone , she should sort our her priorities and lust should the last thing on her list of priorities Theo really needs to smarter up because everything is happening under his own nose and he's not noticing The book is amazing and the writing style is amazing as well , I love the spark between Eliana and Theo"

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Good story

"Keeps you on the edge of your seat. I love it. The nastiness of his daughter and her friend, I love it. "

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Good book!

"Very good at getting us attatched to the characters!"

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Great story

"The story built up slowly. Can't wait to read what is store for the next chaptes"

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Whew!

"Lots of hot sex🥵"

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Need to subscribe (With Payment)

"Don't start reading unless you want to subscribe (NEED PAYMENT), you will just get disappointed."

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