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Love this story
"This gets better every chapter! Definitely will be following this author for more books!"
Fairly Enjoyable! Pacing and Descriptions Need Work!
"The plot is interesting and the characters are likeable however the pacing is very rough. Each paragraph is only a couple sentences and there seem to be very little physical descriptors. Work on those and this would be amuch higher rating! :]"
