Inkitt
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"Most of the tales are rather gory, with blood and murder everywhere. I had difficulty in understanding the character's motivation for killing, or revenge. For instance, in "Chapter 1: The killer in me" i do not find it plausible that a person who is hyper sensitive to sound, smell or touch would enter a home where a teenager is watching television loudly, and then kill her because she screams and uses too much perfume. Why does he not find a quiet place to get out of the rain, like an abandoned house, or the awning of a shop? Why is he so sensitive? We don't know so it is hard to understand. What happened to make him this way? There should be some reason for him choosing that house, that family. I liked the poem about Peanut butter, Jelly and Toast. It was quirky! This book would be better if the characters were more fleshed out, and their motives made clear. The language, grammar and punctuation is done well."

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