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Mastery
"Kelly, You may be submissive but you mastered this. Excellent descriptive writing. Every sentence was thoughtfully written and brought a rising tension and exhilaration. This is the best I have read by you. It is mastery of the short, short story. It did not need to be one word longer to be complete. Bravo."
Superb Degradation
"I love the narrator's internal dialogue here. How being unceremoniously used by a young man makes her realise exactly what she is. @Kellythesub knows just what to say, and also when to leave something unsaid. This story got me so -"
