What is your opinion?
Mr.Gabriel's REVENGE
"I thoroughly enjoyed this book. It was the best written book I've ever read about vampire s."
Mr.gaberial
"The book is good but the writing is very confusing so go back over it"
Mr Gabriel
"What a mind-bender. Excellent "
Fantastic book!
"I am so stuck on reading this book! Keeps getting better and better."
Psychological Realism?!
"Interesting. I enjoyed the opening chapters; during which we get the first person account via the titular character, Mr Gabriel. A difficult thing to pull off - creating a pretty awful character yet keeping reader interested, but well done. Some issues arose in the mid-section: *The term Bi-polar was not used originally. This scene shows Jack telling Gabriel he is Bi-polar, set in 19th century (horse and carriage) it seems. Discovered in 1851, was called Manic Depressive Psychosis; or Circular Insanity. The term Bi-polar was not coined until 1950s. *"walls are chipping green and white paint" - I think the word is chipped. The walls themselves cannot do any chipping. *Overuse of the word 'flip'. *"standing in line" - in this scene you have Addison and Jack; in the guise of the tall, black man, facing the wall, just the two of them. 'In line suggest a number of people, should it be "Side-by-side"? *Chpts 19/20 - POVs jump about a bit and becomes confusing. * You don't need to put exclamation marks around a persons name - 'Evan'/'Rosemary'; unless that is, they are not their names. I found the late middling chapters somewhat confused. Vampire story great, but all the creation/alien/hallucinations/telepathy/serum-venom/dead-not-dead gives impression that too much is being squeezed into one story. Takes away any psychological realism, for me. Enjoyed how Gabriel came out the other side of the Reuben/asylum situation not knowing who or what he was. This could have been drawn out until the end (especially as you have intimated this is part 1 of 2 or more) The concept of a vampire not knowing he is a vampire and having to rediscover himself, is a really great idea, don't rush it. Needs a little editing to address a couple of grammar issues before publishing."
Excellent
"Liking the work so far it's really something ells to read, You are a deep,disturbing person for coming up with this kind of reading material but it's exciting and excellent hope to read more of your work "
Mr Gabriel
"The book is crazy but sometimes hard to keep track of who is who. Writing this too a good deal of work. I did notice a similarity in this book in which I've read in another book. It's kind of like Demon Seed by Dean Koontz. Some of it is due to the pregnancy. A little dark for my taste but not bad. "
Interesting and different
"I think I would recommend. Very interesting story, different from anything I've read so far. Some issues with repeated words but nothing too bad. "
Mr. Gabriel
"I have absolutely no words.... This was so strange in the way that I kept reading and now I don’t even know."
Good work there!
"I loved the plot and your writing style. The story kept me hooked. It was a good read😊"
SO CONFUSED
"I've read this twice now. It starts out really good but then becomes jumbled and confusing. There are parts where I don't know if I'm reading Ruben, Jack, or Gabriel's point of view and I become terribly confused. I have begun to think that the three are really just 1 character. This is definitely a sick twisted deeply disturbing story. I'm still on the fence if I like it or not. "
Not for everyone
"It started off really strong but lost me somewhere along the way. I just couldn't stay in the story it was kind of all over the place for me. "
