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Riveting!

"A superbly-written erotic thriller, that combines, intrigue, suspense, tech and espionage, to leave readers craving more."

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Unique and compelling erotic fiction

"This is a sophisticated story. It is extraordinarily well written, beautifully written actually. That said, it is a fast paced page turner. The perfectly chosen words and phraseology really shows in the erotic scenes, especially their build up. The underlying story is far more multifaceted than most in this genre. It is infused with just the right amount of science: accurate and well researched technology as well as plausible fictional applications. And it is all firmly in service of the main erotic theme and psychological tensions. Bottom line: VERY highly recommended. Very erotically satisfying yet probably unlike anything else you’ve read in this genre. Watch out for this new author! A star is being born."

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Puzzled

"Mads. I can’t say I understood everything in this story, but it made me keep going just to see how it all ended. I still can’t work out how Alan’s male body became Lana’s female body without surgery. She was a female having sex, so must have had a woman’s actual body. Having said all that Mads you are a very skilled and adventurous writer. Well done. Lee."

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