PAGES OF THE PULSE

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Summary

Dr. Kieran Velasquez doesn't just read medical dramas—he rewrites them. A brilliant trauma surgeon with a gift for medicine and a talent for pushing people away, Kieran's only escape is a gritty webcomic, Trauma Code: Saint’s Edge. Until the night he falls asleep reading it… and wakes up as its idealistic protagonist, Dr. Jin Seo, in a dystopian hospital where the equipment is archaic and every case is a death sentence. Kieran discovers a dangerous rhythm: every life he saves in the comic snaps him back to reality, and the surgery he just performed appears in the next online chapter. He’s now a surgeon in two worlds—mastering cutting-edge technology in Los Angeles, and improvising miracles with gauze and grit in the comic's decaying wards. But the line between fiction and reality is bleeding thin. Patients from the comic begin appearing on his real-world operating table. Budget cuts and equipment failures mirror the comic's decay. And the mysterious author behind it all is someone from his past—dying, and claiming she lost control of the story. To save both his worlds from a fatal plot, Kieran must do the one thing his genius has never allowed: merge his surgical skill with the heart of the character he inspired. Because if the final chapter closes, a universe—and everyone in it—will flatline for good.

Genre
Fantasy
Author
Erigin
Status
Complete
Chapters
40
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1 – Code Black

Chapter 1 – Code Black

The symphony of chaos in Los Angeles General’s Trauma Bay One was a composition Dr. Kieran Velasquez knew by heart. The staccato beeps of half-a-dozen monitors formed the erratic baseline. The percussive slam of gurneys into stabilizers, the rip of Velcro from trauma shears, the guttural, wet sounds of human bodies in catastrophic distress—these were the melodies. And over it all, the frantic, rising descant of human fear: the shouts of nurses, the questions of residents, the low moans of the dying.

Kieran conducted it all with the icy precision of a maestro.

“I need a CTA chest, abdomen, pelvis on Bed Two, now, not after your coffee break,” he said, his voice a low, controlled blade that cut through the din without needing to rise. He didn’t look at the fleeing resident. His eyes were fixed on the slurry of blood and saline swirling in the suction canister connected to Bed One.

A voice crackled from the overhead speaker, tinny and strained.

“Trauma Team, two more criticals inbound from the 405 pileup. ETA three minutes. Police escort. One reported flail chest, one blunt abdominal trauma, hypotensive. They’re coding in the bus.”

A ripple of fresh tension went through the bay. They were already at capacity, a warzone of broken glass, torn fabric, and the sharp, metallic smell of blood. Kieran’s gaze swept the room, a general assessing a losing battlefield. He pointed a gloved finger, already speckled with crimson, at a senior nurse, Lin.

“Clear Bay Three. Move the ankle fracture to the hall. Set up for a thoracotomy and an ex-lap. Get two massive transfusion protocol packs opened and hanging. Now.”

He didn’t wait for confirmation. He was already turning back to the elderly man on Bed One, a victim of a solo rollover, now sporting a temporary external fixator on a shattered femur. “Pressure’s dropping, Kieran,” a nurse called out.

“He’s bleeding into his pelvis,” Kieran stated, not a guess. “Type and cross for four more units. Get IR on the phone. If they’re not in this room in ten minutes, I’m opening him up here and packing it myself.” The threat was delivered with such flat certainty that the nurse immediately reached for the phone.

The double doors hissed open with the sound of impending storm. Two gurneys, side-by-side, exploded into the bay, propelled by paramedics whose faces were masks of adrenaline and sweat.

“This one’s the flail! Intubated en route, right side’s a mess, saturations dropping!” a paramedic yelled, slapping the handle of the first gurney towards the team Kieran had designated.

“This one’s belly is hard as a rock! BP 70 over 40, fading fast! Got a line in the humerus!” the other paramedic shouted, steering the second victim towards the adjacent bay.

Kieran split his attention like a processor allocating threads.

Patient A.Young male, maybe early twenties. His right chest wall moved in a sick, paradoxical rhythm—sucking in when it should expand, a classic flail chest. The vent tube was in place, but the bagging was doing little; the monitor showed oxygen saturation plummeting through the 80s.Tension pneumothorax.

The collapsed lung, under pressure, was shoving his heart and other lung across his chest, a slow, mechanical suffocation.

Patient B.Middle-aged woman, unconscious. Her abdomen was distended, taut like a overripe fruit.

Hypotensive from blunt abdominal trauma. She was bleeding out inside her own skin.

“You,” Kieran said, pointing to a competent-looking second-year resident, Roberts, who was hovering near Patient B. “FAST exam. Now. Tell me what you see.” It was both a test and a delegation. He needed to be in two places at once.

Kieran descended on Patient A. “Get me a 14-gauge angiocath, chlorhexidine, and a hemostat. And a chest tube tray. Move.” The team around him scrambled.

He didn’t wait for perfect sterility. This was about physics, not microbiology. He ripped the man’s torn shirt aside, his fingers palpating the ribcage. He found the 5th intercostal space at the mid-axillary line—the safe zone, away from major vessels. A nurse swabbed a hurried blot of chlorhexidine. Kieran took the long angiocath, its needle sharp and cruel in the fluorescent light.

“Time?” he asked, his voice calm.

“Uh, 22:17,” a nurse responded.

“Mark it. Needle decompression attempted.” With a firm, precise thrust, he pushed the needle through skin, subcutaneous tissue, intercostal muscle, and into the pleural space. There was a distinct, satisfying hiss—the sound of pressurized air escaping a tire. The monitor’s relentless alarm for low O2 saturation stuttered, then went silent. The number began a slow, tentative climb from 82% to 88%. It was a temporary fix. The needle would clog with blood or tissue in minutes.

“Good. Now, we do it for real. Chest tube.”

The tray slapped onto the bedside table. Kieran’s movements were a blur of practiced economy. Another, more thorough prep. A scalpel in his hand. A 3-centimeter horizontal incision over the same spot. He used the scalpel handle to bluntly dissect through the muscle layers, feeling his way, tactile guidance alone. He could feel the give of the tissue, the scrape of the rib, the final pop as he entered the pleural space. A fresh, louder rush of air. He slid his gloved index finger into the incision, sweeping it around to clear any adhesions and confirm placement. No CT needed; his finger was the best imaging tool in the house.

“Tube.” A nurse slapped the 36-French chest tube into his waiting hand. He guided it along his finger, into the dark, air-filled cavity. A gush of dark blood followed the air—confirming a hemothorax as well. He connected it to the Pleur-evac suction canister, which immediately began bubbling with sanguineous fluid. He sutured the tube in place with two heavy, permanent silk sutures.

“CXR to confirm, but he’s bought,” Kieran said, stripping off his bloody gloves. He didn’t look at the young man’s face. He looked at the monitor. The heart rate was coming down. The pressure was stabilizing. The numbers were good. That was all that mattered.

He turned. Resident Roberts was still fumbling the ultrasound probe over Patient B’s belly, his face pale.

“Find it yet, or are you painting a portrait?” Kieran’s voice was a lash.

“I… there’s fluid in Morison’s pouch. And the splenorenal recess. And the pelvis. It’s everywhere,” Roberts stammered, pointing at the grainy, grey screen.

Positive FAST exam. Free fluid in the abdomen. Blood. A lot of it.

“She’s tanking! BP 60 palp!” a nurse cried out.

Kieran was already gowned and re-gloved at the second bed. “Permissive hypotension protocol. Don’t chase a normal pressure, you’ll pop what clots she has. Just keep her barely perfused. Run the blood wide open. Get the cell saver primed. We’re going in.”

This was Damage Control Laparotomy (DCL). This wasn’t about fixing; it was about survival. Speed was the only god.

The scalpel was in his hand again. From xiphoid process to pubis, one long, ruthless incision. The skin parted. The fat layer. The fascia. He used scissors to open the peritoneum, and the dam broke.

A wave of dark, clotted blood welled up and over the wound. The suction roared, fighting a losing battle. Kieran thrust his hands into the warm, metallic cavity. He packed bowel aside with large lap sponges, his fingers searching by feel. Liver, spleen, stomach, diaphragm. The source.

There. The right lobe of the liver was pulp. A Grade V laceration—the worst kind. It wasn’t just cut; it was shattered. It was bleeding from a dozen arterial and venous sources deep in its parenchyma.

“Packs. Ten. Now.”

The nurse handed him the large, white laparotomy pads, each one a 30cm by 30cm square of gauze. Kieran began packing them into the injury, using his fist to drive them deep into the fissures of the shattered organ, applying direct, crushing pressure. One, two, three… he lost count. He was building a tamponade inside her, using the packs to physically compress the bleeding surfaces against the back of her abdominal wall and diaphragm.

“Pressure?” he grunted, his arms deep inside the woman.

“Coming up! 85 systolic!”

“Good. Stop the blood. Keep her cold.” He meant keep the room cold, limit metabolic demand. He began placing more packs around the liver, walling it off. He didn’t try to suture the unsuturable. He controlled. He contained.

“Temporary closure,” he ordered. He would not close the skin and risk abdominal compartment syndrome from the swelling. A nurse handed him the Bogota bag—a sterile, three-liter IV bag sliced open. He sutured its edges to the skin of the abdominal wall, creating a clear, protective silo for her bulging, packed intestines.

“To the SICU. Re-exploration in 48 hours. Tell them her liver is confetti and I’ve packed it with the hospital’s linen supply.” He stepped back, letting the team take over the transport. His blue scrubs were now more red than blue, soaked through from sternum to knee. The adrenaline, which had been a silent, focused hum, began to recede, leaving behind a familiar, hollow static.

He walked out of the bay, past the lesser injuries, past the crying families held back by security, into the relative quiet of the staff corridor. He leaned against the cool, painted cinderblock wall, closing his eyes for a single moment. The echo of the alarms was still in his bones.

In the call room, he peeled off the ruined scrubs, showered in water so hot it turned his skin pink, the blood swirling down the drain in rusty rivulets. He dressed in a fresh set, the cotton stiff and impersonal. He had three hours before he was back on. Sleep was a theoretical concept, but the body demanded its due.

He collapsed onto the narrow, vinyl-covered bed, its mattress thin as a cracker. The room smelled of stale sweat and industrial cleaner. He pulled his phone from his locker. The screen was cracked. Notifications from the hospital system glowed—lab results, consult requests. He swiped them away.

His thumb found an icon: a stylized, dripping EKG line forming a comic book ‘TC’. Trauma Code: Saint’s Edge.

He tapped it. The last panel he’d read loaded. It depicted the protagonist, Dr. Jin Seo, a man with implausibly perfect hair and wide, earnest eyes, standing in a rundown trauma bay. He was holding the hand of a grimy street urchin with a broken arm. A speech bubble read: “Don’t be afraid. This hospital is a place of hope. We fight for every heartbeat, no matter how small.”

Kieran’s lip curled. “Hope doesn’t stop a hepatic artery bleed,” he muttered to the empty room. The medicine in the comic was surprisingly accurate—the author clearly did their research—but the sentiment was nauseating. In his world, you fought with knowledge, with speed, with technique. You fought against physiology, against time, against entropy. You didn’t fight for hope. Hope was a byproduct of success, not a tool.

He scrolled back a few chapters, to a dramatic scene where Jin was performing an emergency thoracotomy with a box cutter. The anatomy was decent, but the drama was overwrought. Internal monologue bubbles filled with self-doubt and righteous determination. Kieran skimmed it. It was a distraction. A sterile, controlled fantasy of trauma where the good guys, through sheer grit, always won.

His eyes grew heavy, the words on the screen blurring. The phantom sounds of the suction, the feel of the shattered liver under his fingers, the cold certainty of the math—blood in, blood out—replayed in a loop behind his eyelids. The phone slumped onto his chest, the bright screen casting a pale, comic-book glow on his exhausted face.

The last coherent thought he had was a clinical assessment of Jin Seo’s technique with the box cutter.

Wrong intercostal space. You’d nick the spleen.

Then, nothing.

The silence was absolute, and deeper than any sleep should be. It was the silence of a vacuum, of a place without monitors or vents or distant sirens.

It was broken by a metallic, grinding clang, and a voice laced with a panic he’d never heard in his own nurses.

“DR. SEO! DR. SEO, PLEASE, WE NEED YOU!”

The light that hit his eyelids was not the flat fluorescence of LA General. It was yellow, flickering, sickly. It smelled not of antiseptic, but of rust, stale blood, and old wood.

Kieran Velasquez opened his eyes. He was not in the call room.

And the young, terrified woman shaking his shoulder was calling him by another man’s name.