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"I think finding a complex and multi fascinate book on Inkitt is rare. You are not gonna find your sweet little fairytale in this book. This book is gonna have character development and processing of character emotions. It is completely necessary to have drama or unprocessed feelings in order to prolong the book and add depth, not everything in life ends in a sweet little fairytale in fact, most things do not if you are gonna review the book please be mature enough to actually read it from an expanded view instead of being a childish reviewer. Of course, a character in the beginning of a book it’s not gonna have great communication skills because character development is him growing into better character/communicator. Please be mature when you review these books, I hope in the future that the book has better readers they can appreciate its complexity. But there’s plenty of simple books for you to choose from on Inkitt. "

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Drags and Drags through Contrivances

"It's mostly filled out with contrivances to keep extending the plot. The plot keeps making the characters miscommunicate in the silliest of ways to keep drama happening. Noah has the communication skills of a rat."

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