Chapter 1
Stacey goes into her room after her birthday party she is 10 now. Stacey seemed upset but why? her mom came in and asked if she was ok stacey she said yes "now im tired can you get out sure get some rest ". You see Stacey does not have a father he left her when she was born now previously it is june 23 2011
It is her 11th birthday she is still in a comma. Her mom does not know what to do her mom worked 3 jobs a day 24hours a night she is tired her mom tries to come and see her but it is hard stacey has brothers they just don't care but one brother does his name is mike he is 14 so 2 years older than her her mom is getting worried so she got incontact with her staceys dad her dad lives in washington if u guys are wondering what his name is it is dave typicale name right you should here his grandpas name it is really weird back about stacey when she was little she played with dolls and wanted to always have a boyfreind with her interaction with boys was weird she was shy could not talk because she was a nerd but there was this one football jock who did not care if she was a nerd or that he like her because of her personality so there was this weekend where it was close to homcomig aka hocco . He acctually got the nerve during school to ask her out he said stacey garcia will you go to hocco with me and she said yes kinda after getting food thrown at her she made a club for nerd's and they go to competitons for there best suits it is really cool that was what happened before she got in a comma.
question time #
first question is during chapter one throught the pages go through and find any mistakes i have made and fix them second question is during chapter one when your reading what feeling are you getting from this chapter .