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The True Light

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Summary

Before sin existed, before Hell or the Fall itself, there was only light. And from that light came Samael - the most beautiful and promising of the celestial princes, chosen to carry the divine radiance to the Father's creations, to command angelic legions, and to guide the heavenly choir with new melodies. But the greater the light, the clearer the shadow. From the beginning, Samael stands out for something no other angel possesses: true free will - the very gift that would one day be granted to humanity. While his brothers - Michael, Gabriel, and Raphael - follow commands with devotion, Samael battles his own will, questioning rules, destiny... and even the Creator's love. In a Heaven where perfection is law and obedience is virtue, he will be the first to feel the weight of desire, doubt, and freedom. And among training, bonds of brotherhood, and songs that celebrate creation, something begins to take shape - something that will change the universe forever: the Rebellion of Light. ⚜️ Before he was the fallen angel... he was God's favorite. This is the story of Samael - before he became Lucifer. ⚜️ ◎ A story written entirely by me. [‼️Warning: Any attempt to copy or steal my story outside of this app may result in legal action. My book is registered with the US National Library.]

Genre
Fantasy
Author
Ilumir
Status
5mo ago
Chapters
8
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1: The Beginning of Everything

NARRATOR:

"In the beginning, there was only the void. A universe without form, without light, without sound. But within that lonely vastness existed a being of infinite power. No one knew where He came from or when He appeared. He simply... was.

For countless eras He remained alone, wrapped in darkness and absolute silence. But then, a desire grew within Him-a desire to create, to illuminate, to fill the emptiness with something beyond Himself.

And so, He raised His hand and, with a single thought, lit the stars. They appeared like blazing torches in the infinite expanse, banishing the shadows so they could never again rule His creation. The void became a stage of light and beauty.

Yet even surrounded by such splendor, loneliness persisted. And then He created beings to love-beings who reflected His glory, His purity, His immortal essence. He created the angels.

They were perfect. Beings made of light and devotion, destined to serve and worship, to spread His will across the newborn universe. Each was born with a purpose, each had a place in the grand design.

And among all angels, there were four who received a special place beside the Creator, God, the celestial princes. At the heart of Heaven, within the great golden palace, the Creator cherished them as precious children: Gabriel, Raphael, Michael... and Samael.

But even in the realm of perfection, the story was still unwritten. And the fate of these brothers would change forever..."

Inside God's palace room, God gently brushed Gabriel's hair. The small angel squirmed, impatient.

Gabriel: "Father, why do we always have to get ready? It's boring..."

God smiled at His child's innocence and replied serenely:

God: "Because we must keep a good appearance for those who admire us."

Samael, sitting beside them, lifted his chin proudly.

Samael: "Exactly! We need to be impeccable so they know who stands above them."

Gabriel frowned, uneasy.

Gabriel: "But... they're our brothers too..."

Before he could finish, Samael shrugged.

Samael: "So what? We're still better than them."

God knelt, placing a prince's crown softly on Samael's head.

God: "It's not like that, Light. We are not better than anyone. We are all part of one creation. We simply have different roles."

Michael, sitting on the floor playing with Raphael, laughed.

Michael: "Haha! Samael and his obsession with being more important than everyone."

Samael jumped onto the couch, hand on his chest proudly.

Samael: "But I AM more important! Without me you'd never have light! I am the morning star!~ the one and the first-"

Raphael interrupted, blinking innocently.

Raphael: "But... didn't the light come from Father?"

Samael's smile faltered. He hesitated.

Samael: "Ah... yes... but it came from me too!"

God chuckled, lifting Samael and placing him gently on the floor.

God: "Haha, alright, alright, little lantern. Now, let us go. Today is a special day."

He took their tiny hands and led them out. Outside, the celestial palace gleamed and a gathering of angels celebrated. The gates opened. God and the young princes stepped onto the grand balcony. They smiled and waved as the angels cheered with joy.

God: "Today is a special day. The day Heaven was born. Our first anniversary!"

The crowd erupted in celebration.

The next day, the four brothers prepared for their duties. Samael and Michael tried to sneak away while God's back was turned. But God, knowing everything, spoke without looking:

God: "And where do you think you're going?"

(turns to them)

"Hm, little ones?"

Michael (awkward laugh): "We were just going to play a little."

God: "It is not playtime. It is time for your tasks. Don't you want to discover your purposes for the future? For that, you must pass the tests."

Samael: "We know, we know... those boring trainings..."

Michael: "But Father, let us play just a little?"

God sighed, softened by Michael's sweet look.

God: "Very well. You may go, but only for a little."

The two lit up and ran off. God looked at Gabriel and Raphael

God: "You may go as well."

They followed excitedly.

Scene: Garden of Heaven

Outside, Samael and Michael ran joyfully. The garden was vast: green fields, a bright sky, gentle light reflecting from the palace.

Samael lay beneath a tree. Michael sat beside him.

Michael: "It's such a beautiful day~ and He still wants us to waste it training, haha..."

Samael (relaxed, gazing at the scenery): "Yes... almost too beautiful."

Michael: "You know, we're lucky to live like this."

Samael: "We're lucky to be princes."

Michael rolled his eyes and laughed, standing up.

Michael: "You're lucky to have me~. What would you be without me?"

Samael: "A lot, actually~"

Michael: "I doubt it. Come on, let's play!"

Samael: "But we still have duties to do..."

Michael: "We'll go while playing."

Samael sighed and stood.

Samael: "Fine... but don't blame anything on me later!"

Michael laughed, and music began.


♫ SONG NAME: "The Brother I Dreamed Of" ♫


Michael:

🎶"I am king of angels

And I will lead, I will lead

With my brother"🎶

Samael:

🎶"My brother"🎶

Michael:

🎶"No one will stop us"🎶

Samael:

🎶"Hah, if you say so..."🎶

Michael:

🎶"I am sure~

I am a king~"🎶

Samael:

🎶"King of what?"🎶

Michael:

🎶"Of angels

And I will lead, I will lead

With my brother"🎶

Samael:

🎶"My brother"🎶

Michael:

🎶"No one will stop us"🎶

Samael:

🎶"Then let's prove it~"🎶

Michael:

🎶"Let's go?"🎶

Samael:

🎶"Let's go~"🎶

Michael & Samael:

🎶"Let's go!"🎶

Angel Choir:

🎶"Heeey~

Since the very first day, those two don't separate, not once"🎶

Michael:

🎶"Okay, stop complaining, just let us..."🎶

Michael & Samael:

🎶"Have some fun! Let's go!"🎶

Angel Choir:

🎶"When one thinks, the other speaks

When one thinks, the other speaks

When one runs, the other follows"🎶

Michael:

🎶"That's because we are literally..."🎶

Michael & Samael:

🎶"Twins! Let's go!"🎶

Angel Choir:

🎶"They play in Heaven, make a mess

Always flying, causing chaos in the skies"🎶

Michael (singing as Samael trips while playing):

🎶"Haha! I've got everything under control

No need to worry!"🎶

Michael & Samael:

🎶"Let's go!"🎶

Angel Choir:

🎶"But together they shine like a single light

The Father's princes, children of the Light~"🎶

Michael:

🎶"And I'll say this for the tenth time today:

The brother I dreamed of,

The brother I dreamed of,

The brother I dreamed of,

Is you"🎶

Michael & Samael:

🎶"The brother I dreamed of,

The brother I dreamed of,

The brother I dreamed of,

Is you"🎶

Samael:

🎶"Have you noticed?

Everything brightened once we arrived here"🎶

Michael:

🎶"You're so self-centered~ oh, brother..."🎶

Samael:

🎶"What, brother?"🎶

Michael:

🎶"When I become leader, everything will be brighter and perfect"🎶

Samael:

🎶"And I'll be the main attraction of light

The great morning star..."🎶

Michael:

🎶"Don't forget me!~"🎶

Samael:

🎶"Together, we'll be the most important in all history"🎶

Michael:

🎶"I can't wait for that day"🎶

Samael:

🎶"And unfortunately, I must share the spotlight with this silly brother"🎶

Michael:

"Hah!"

Samael:

🎶"But I think I can handle it for eternity"🎶

Michael:

🎶"Okay, we must make it happen.

Let's go move!"🎶

Michael & Samael:

🎶"Let's go play!~"🎶

Angel Choir:

🎶"Heeey~

Since the very first day, those two don't separate, not once"🎶

Michael:

🎶"Of course we won't"🎶

Samael:

🎶"We are strength"🎶

Michael:

🎶"We are unity"🎶

Samael:

🎶"We are-"🎶

Michael:

🎶"Let's go!"🎶

Angel Trainer (flying with warrior angels, observing them):

🎶"That boy is such a bad influence on him

Just by watching, I can already tell"🎶

Michael (singing firmly in front of the palace, staring at angels around him):

🎶"I'll say it one last time

I'm tired of your whispers

I warned you, don't trigger

I already told you, behave or you're gonna see

Shut your mouth

My brother is no joke

No one talks about my brother..."🎶

Michael: "Where did he go?"

(Samael steps away quietly, afraid of punishment for Michael's boldness)

Samael, (alone):

🎶"Even if they all say they love me

I don't feel I belong here

I feel I don't fit in this order..."🎶

Choir, softly:

🎶"Different...

Different...

Different..."🎶

Transition - teens (~15-16 years old)

Michael and Samael are in a small initiation battle to determine their destinies as angels.

Michael:

🎶"I always wanted a brother like you

I always wanted a brother like you

I always dreamed

Of sharing a great fight~"🎶

Samael:

🎶"I always wanted a brother like you

I always wished for a brother like you

Even if we're running a little late now"🎶

Michael:

"Hey, Samael~" 🎶

Samael:

"Yes, Michael" 🎶

Michael:

🎶"I feel our dreams are close to coming true"🎶

Samael

🎶"I feel our dreams are close to coming true"🎶

Michael & Samael:

🎶"I feel our dreams are close to coming true"🎶

The song ends as they kneel and strike their spears into the ground beside their brothers before God.


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