Deathwish: The Smith by Renato Aricheta at Inkitt
Customize readability
Aa

DEATHWISH: The Smith

All Rights Reserved ©

Summary

The Legend of the Gear-Grinder: The Clockmaker's also known as 'The Smith' ​Before he was a nightmare in fluted silver, he was simply Vane, a humble village smith and clock-carpenter. Vane didn't care for kings or wars; he cared for the heartbeat of machines. He could fix a shattered plow or build a wooden clock so precise it could track the moon's phases. ​But Malakor's recruiters didn't want his clocks; they wanted his hands. When Vane refused to forge instruments of torture, they burned his workshop with his family locked inside. Vane watched the embers and realized that time was the only true thief. He didn't scream; he sat amidst the ashes and began to "fix" the fire, slowing the flames with a sudden, localized fracture in reality. ​Malakor found him standing in a frozen moment of smoke and bone. He saw a man who could smith not just iron, but the very fabric of when. He became the Clockmaker, the Smith of Seconds, forging the armor of the Decem-Guard until every gear in his heart turned with a hatred for the living.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
10
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1: The Throne of Ash and Altitude

Chapter 1: The Throne of Ash and Altitude

​The world below was a graveyard of history. The great keeps of Valerion and the obsidian spires of the Solace Empire were now nothing but jagged ruins, reclaimed by the choking vines of the Blackwood. From their wreckage rose the Kingdom of Elamira.

​Sitting precisely on the border of the two fallen giants, the city had been transformed. At its center stood the Crimson Keep, a castle of blood-red stone so impossibly high that its upper spires pierced the clouds. It was a feat of architecture impossible for men alone; Pip had commanded the dragons to haul the massive stones into the heavens, creating a fortress that remained forever out of reach for any wing or weapon.

​Inside the High Hall, the wealth of a united land was visible. Golden Dragon coins and Silver Fist cents, the new currency of the realm, clinked in the pouches of the merchants below. But at the top of the keep, the air was thin and smelled of death.

​Pip sat upon the throne, looking more like a corpse than a king. The Grave-Light chemicals had finally claimed his vitality; his skin was a translucent grey, and every breath was a wet, rattling struggle. He looked down at the new world he had built, a kingdom born of a jester’s joke and a butcher’s mace.

​“It’s a long way down, isn’t it, Kael?” Pip rasped, coughing a spray of black bile into a silk cloth.

​Kael stood by the balcony, looking out over the clouds. He was draped in heavy, dark furs, his mace leaning against a pillar of dragon-bone. “It’s too high, Pip. You can’t smell the blood from up here. It makes a man forget what he is.”

​“I brought you here to remember,” Pip countered, his eyes burning with a final, desperate light. “The Smith, the Clockmaker, he is forging something in the dark. My beasts can’t see him. The wind doesn’t know where he is. He is smacking the anvil of time itself.”

​Pip gestured to the three women standing at the foot of the throne: the sharp-eyed Seraphina, the calculating Marcella, and Lady Briony of the Iron Reach, who stood with her hand on the hilt of a short-sword, her eyes fixed on Kael with a look of pure, unadulterated challenge.

​“The Kingdom of Elamira needs a Smith of its own,” Pip continued, his voice dropping to a whisper. “Not of gears, but of blood. One of these women will help you forge an heir, Kael. Because when the Clockmaker returns, he won’t bring an army. He will bring the end of tomorrow.”

​Kael walked toward Briony, his heavy boots echoing in the silent hall. He looked at the woman who had watched him burn her family’s gates and saw no fear-only the same stubborn arrogance that kept him alive.

​“A contest, then?” Kael mocked, his old cocky grin flickering for a second. “Fine. But if they die during the trials, don’t ask me to refund the coins.”

​Pip smiled, a terrifying sight on his dying face. “The trials aren’t just for them, Butcher. They’re for you. Because a King of Dirt is easy to be... but a King of a High Crimson Castle? That requires a soul.”​As Pip finished speaking, every clock in the Crimson Keep, from the grand pendulum in the hall to the small watches on the guards’ wrists, suddenly stopped. The silence was deafening.

​Pip’s eyes widened. “He’s here. He isn’t waiting for the contest to end.”

​A shadow began to stretch across the floor, moving against the direction of the sunlight. It was the shadow of a man holding a smith’s hammer, and it was moving faster than time itself.



​The three ladies, Seraphina, Marcella, and Briony, stood like statues under the oppressive weight of the stopped clocks. The silence in the High Hall was unnatural, a physical pressure that made their ears ring.

​Pip’s head rolled back against the dragon-bone throne. His eyes were wide, fixed on the corner where the shadow of the Smith’s hammer continued to grow, despite the lack of a sun.

​“Kael...” Pip wheezed, his hand trembling as he reached for the mace leaning against the pillar. “He isn’t... alone.”

​From the freezing mists that swirled around the Crimson Keep’s highest balcony, a figure drifted in. It wasn’t the Clockmaker, not yet. It was theNecro-Shaman, his rotted robes fluttering in a wind that didn’t touch anything else. He moved toward the throne, stepping over the Golden Dragon coins scattered on the floor as if they were pebbles.

​He leaned over the dying Jester, his skeletal jaw unhinging to release a breath that smelled of centuries-old dirt. He didn’t look at Pip; he looked directly at Kael, who had already gripped his mace, his knuckles white with the “Blood-Rage” beginning to simmer in his veins.

​The Shaman let out a sound like dry parchment tearing, a laugh.

​“The first volume was about the living,”the Shaman hissed, the words vibrating through the floorboards. ”The second was about the royal. But the third... the third is about the debt.”

​Kael stepped forward, his eyes burning with the void of the God of Death. “I paid my debts in Solace blood, you bag of sticks. Get out of my house before I turn you into kindling.”

​“You built a house of crimson stone to hide from the dirt,” the Shaman countered, pointing a jagged finger at the three highborn women. “You think you can forge a future by burying the past? No, Butcher. The Smith has come to reclaim the materials. Every gear he turns is a heartbeat stolen from your line.”

​The Shaman turned his gaze to Lady Briony. The Iron Reach survivor didn’t flinch, even as the frost from the Shaman’s presence began to coat her armor.

​“A debt is a heavy thing to carry into a marriage, little wolf,” the Shaman whispered.

​With those words, the Shaman vanished into a cloud of ash. The clocks in the room suddenly began to whirl backward, the hands spinning at a blur, screaming with the friction of metal on metal.

​Kael turned to Pip, but the Jester was coughing up gold-flecked blood onto the throne.

​“The contest...” Pip gasped, his vision fading. “Kael... start the contest. The Smith... he’s not just coming for your head. He’s coming to unmake the day you were born.”

​Kael realizes that the “Trial of the Hunt” isn’t just about a beast in the woods. The Clockmaker has used his smithing skills to “re-forge” the dead animals of the Blackwood into clockwork abominations.

Kael to Briony: “If you want to be my Queen, you better be ready to kill things that have already been dead for an hour. And don’t get blood on the furs, they’re new.”

Let Renato Aricheta know what you thought about this chapter!
Love this

0

Love this

Funny

0

Funny

Spicy

0

Spicy

Suspenseful

0

Suspenseful

Emotional

0

Emotional

Profound

0

Profound

Heartwarming

0

Heartwarming

Shocking

0

Shocking

Good Writing

0

Good Writing

Compelling Plot

0

Compelling Plot

Great Character

0

Great Character

Strong Dialog

0

Strong Dialog

Further Recommendations

Destino Secreto

Karin Rogowski: Gut geschrieben und beschrieben. Die Charaktere und Situationen sind stimmig und nehmen einen gefangen. Mich hat das Buch ab der ersten Zeile fasziniert, genau wie die anderen Bücher davor. Sehr guter Schreibstil und eine sehr gute Übersetzung, nebenbei bemerkt. Dankeschön, dass Du Deine Bücher ...

Read Now
Die Wölfe von Welby

maryketteler: Ich bin von diesem Roman sehr angetan. Es handelt sich um eine wunderschöne Geschichte, die durch ein tolles Happy End abgeschlossen wird.

Read Now
Chroniken der Werwölfe Band 1 Der Gefährte

Stefanie : Manchmal irritieren die Schreibfehler aber die Geschichte ist sehr spannend und ich freue mich das ich weiter lesen kann und es sogar noch weitere Bücher gibt... Bin gespannt wie es weiter geht..

Read Now
Grimveil Gamma - Im Schleier der Schatten

Amy: Ich mochte Kirrok schon im letzten Teil, seinen Zynismus, der ihn oft in die Klemme bringt, aber auch so herrlich sympathisch macht 🥰😅😍 es ist sooo mitreißend und spannend geschrieben, dass sie Zeilen verfliegen und man am Ende angekommen ist. Hervorragende Unterhaltung, ich freue mich schon auf ...

Read Now
Die verschmähte Mate

Angela Dahmen: Nicht ganz logisch. Sie studiert Medizin und kennt sich mit der alten Kräuterkunde aus und schluckt trotzdem die Tabletten ohne zu wissen was drin ist.

Read Now
Werewolf Hollow

Nikole: I hadn't read a werewolves story with this kind of werewolves and dynamics, really interesting

Read Now
Fated to My Ex- Best Friend

Kota2015: A really good read. This is my first time on this web site. Glad I found it!

Read Now
Mystic Wolf

Akthea: Fantastica

Read Now
His Rejected Mate's Ancestral Howl

Degi: This was different, but I loved it ❣️❣️❣️

Read Now