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A fantastic story!

"A wonderful journey of great characters and a well set out plot. It was emotional, funny, exciting. Well worth the read! I couldn’t put it down even when I told myself to go to bed when it was 2am :)"

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Measured weighted fun

"Love how the characters are just developed tall people and personalities. I’m not entirely done, but the plot has been so good! And watching the characters kind of develop as the plot unfolds it’s just really nice sequencing really nice pacing. Definitely one of the most bold male leads I have read in a while, but he also has a lot of depth.  Not much else to say besides another great Melyssa Mills special 💯🤌🏾👏🏾"

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Abby

"Some detail on when she discovered she was pregnant. "

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The Moretti Problem

"They are the power couple who complement each other. Loved it thoroughly. Wanted more of them. Action speak louder than words: is proved here. Wonderful story"

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Enjoyed it to the end

"This book is a definition of spicy, intriguing and worth reading. Every chapter kept me glued to the screen and the plot is top notch. I recommend this book to people who love a book with a touch of romance, smut and suspense. "

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The Moretti Problem

"I wish I could be more expressive but I loved every chapter. None of it ever felt like filler as some authors do. Each chapter let you learn something about one or more of the characters. I couldn’t wait for every update. Well done Melyssa. Thank you for the experience."

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The Moretti Problem

"Wow!!! We are officially finished with The Moretti Problen, what are we going to read now Mel...what a great read...thank you for the ride and such a beautiful dive into Kamilah and Joshua as individuals and then as a couple...ur writing is impeccable and meticulous...thank you for this fun and inquisitive ride...looking forward to the next one...we are officially a book club now...👏🏽👏🏽"

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Beautiful Story!

"What a wonderful ride! Thanks for bringing us Kamilah & Joshua's story. It was heartfelt and well written. I loved the complexity of the characters and pace the story unfolded. You know your craft MM! Looking forward to the universe you create for us. "

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Power, Passion, and Obsession Done Right

"This book was amazing. The first chapter starts and immediately surrounds you with ambition, power, and attraction. Kamilah Taylor is the type of heroine I love reading about. She is strong, smart, and hard working, who also refuses to be controlled. She is easily rootable since she has spent years building her career, and we truly see that when she stands up to Joshua Moretti. On top of that, Joshua is an obsessed billionaire, no complaints there. Since he is powerful and possessive, and perfect, we see Kamilah from the start of the book. The story balances Joshua’s determination with respect for Kamilah’s strength since he is very obsessed and possessive. This story is full of wit and banter and leaves you at the edge of your seat. It is very easy to get lost in the pages of this book. The most interesting part of this book is the authors description of the relationship. This was the best romance I have ever read. The author describes every relationship with electric chemistry and purpose. Every relationship leads to the fast moving drama. This book is impossible to put down. This is one of the best books in the genre, so read this book to escape reality. It is full of obsession, passion and drama. The characters will stay with you long after you finish this. Melyssa, you've done it again ✨"

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🔥💥🔥💥🔥💥🔥💥🔥

"This novel delivers exactly what I love in a romance: strong characters, undeniable chemistry, and plenty of tension. Kam is a refreshing female lead—confident, capable, and not easily impressed. She holds her own opposite Joshua, the quiet, reserved MMC who says very little but somehow communicates ALOT. Overall, this book is a great pick for readers who enjoy character-driven romance with a slow burn that truly pays off. If you’re a fan of strong female leads, emotionally guarded heroes, this one is well worth the read."

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Great book!

"If I were to buy a paper back novel, this one would stay on my shelf to be read multiple times. I hope I’m not being premature as I haven’t gotten to the finish line but I am definitely impressed! Great writing!"

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Another one ( khaled voice)

"The story of Kam and Josh is off to a great start. I am obsessed with this couple. If you love a slow burn and a few twists and turns this is for you. In addition to this, this author does not miss. I encourage you to get her subscription it is well worth the value and she is a great writer"

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