THE UNWANTED LANDS: VALLEY OF BONES
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THE UNWANTED LANDS: VALLEY OF BONES

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Story Notes

​"Welcome to the Valley of Bones. This is a journey of survival and mystery in a world lost to time. New chapters will be published every week. Thank you for joining Menenmut on his quest."

Summary

In a world where the sun is a fading memory and ancient bones litter the horizon, Menenmut is a man marked by fate. Once a visionary inventor in the golden city, he now wanders the desolate Valley of Bones—an exile seeking more than just survival. Within the shifting sands and towering ribcages of forgotten giants, a mystery awaits that could reignite the world or consume it forever. The journey begins here, where the sand meets the soul.

Status
6d ago
Chapters
39
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1:The Thief of the Sun

When my footsteps were heard in the streets of Thebes, people would bolt their doors, and mothers would hide their children. My name is Menenmut. But to them, I was just "The Madman." My old linen clothes were stained with mud, and my stomach had been empty for days, but my mind was as vast as a god’s library.

The Nile had been receding for fifty years. The earth screamed from thirst. While everyone offered sacrifices to Ra, I was on the riverbank, measuring the humidity of the wind. When the old Pharaoh died, hopes had dried up along with the river. Yet, when the new Pharaoh ascended the throne, he promised a great reward: "Whoever brings life back to the Nile shall receive their weight in gold!"I went to the palace with heavy rolls of linen on my back and my thousand-patched robes on my body. The guards laughed, but I stood tall in the presence of the Pharaoh. "I will extract water from the air," I said. I set up my apparatus, placing the linens in the heart of the wind. When water began to drip from the cloths at dawn, the people whispered in awe. But the High Priest thundered: "This man is a thief! He is stealing the moisture from the eyes of great Ra!"The success of a genius fell victim to the fear of a priest. They bound my hands. Along with my invention—those linen rolls—I was exiled to the Valley of Bones. As they untied my hands at the edge of the desert, the guards spat in my face. "Let’s see when your bones join the others," they mocked.I walked deep into the scorching sands. The first things I saw were the giant, bleached bones of wild beasts. This was a graveyard abandoned by nature. But I was a genius. I reached the shadow of a massive rock and set down my linens. I gathered the giant vertebrae and joined them together like pipes. I turned the skull of an extinct creature into a water basin. I stretched the linens over a scaffold I had fashioned from rib bones. The world had left me to die, but I would extract life from the bones of death.

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Mudolllet_tunes566

Wow, that cliffhanger at the end of the last chapter was intense! I have a few theories and some light feedback on the character dynamics are you looking for constructive critiques at this stage, or should I just keep my 'cheerleader' hat on? Loving the vibe of this story!

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