Dawn Experiment

bergsma16

225 chapters read

Excellent read

"This story has me waiting for each update with restless excitement. Original story written extremely well with great descriptive language. The erotic content is very hot without the low grade smutty tone that seems to be common these days. This author is extremely talented and I hope they keep writing. You won’t be disappointed. "

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Silverlocks

37 chapters read

I can't believe u killed Captain Verne😭 just as she was opening up, u took her away😭I hope u give her one last chance (revive her huhuhu)

"I like how the characters were written, how they flow and merged with the plot. The elements were great too, such as the use of erotic description and still have a touch of humanity. The intense and suspenseful build-up, love it! This is a must read! I would recommend it to readers looking for something smutty but with a plot story! "

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