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Warm plot in paller colour pallet
"The protectiveness of the protagonist's friends and family members is warm. But the kindness protagonist showed to the spirit is warmer. A heart warming short story. Must read if you like to see uncanny but nice human connections. "
Great Potential
"It was an interesting story, but I think it had the potential to become something more than a purely fictional tale by being grounded more in reality. Instead of featuring a ghost, it could have used an element that felt more believable and logically plausible, making it easier for readers to connect with and understand. That said, I still found the story engaging, unique, and thought-provoking."
