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Deeply Felt

"This story absolutely captured my heart... At first I was puzzled, as I couldn't relate to Calvin. But as it unfolded, I became deeply connected to him. Sorrow was deepened in my heart, and I truly felt alongside Calvin — his thoughts and emotions felt real to me. That’s why I’m genuinely excited for the next chapter. PS: The tall man, and the box: Although they played a small role so far, I can't stop thinking about them, specially the tall man. And of course I feel we will read more of him in following chapters. "

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