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Mrs Maria

"I just love the way is developing and cannot wait to see the rest of it- I’ll be very disappointed if I cannot- please "

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Captivating

"This isn't my usual kind of read ...but I'm absolutely hooked. Love it . "

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Five Stars and Counting

"I’m absolutely loving the way this story is developing. The conflicts are so well built, and the characters are too, especially the protagonist. Isadora feels incredibly real. Even though she was born into privilege, she struggles with things that anyone can relate to. I really like the message the story sends, that nothing is ever truly perfect. From the outside, Isadora seems to have the perfect life, but when you look closer, you realize it’s all just a front. She isn’t happy, but she’s gotten so used to it that she doesn’t even question it anymore. And Henry? He’s just irresistible. It’s honestly impossible not to fall for him. He’s that guy who seems cold, rigid, and intimidating at first, the kind who can silence a room with just a look, but that’s clearly just his armor. Little by little, he shows that he’s actually funny and kind. It’s easy to tell he probably didn’t have an easy childhood, that’s been subtly hinted at already. So far, I have nothing but praise for this story. I highly recommend it and I can’t wait for the next chapters!"

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