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Great start to the story

"Honestly I have read 2 chapters and your plot is intriguing, I am big Sci-fi fan and I'm new to Inkitt and not that used to reading too many digital books but I am enjoying the experience so far. The story is very creative but I think the whole picture thing after every chapter is distracting to ones imagination because the images are not consistent and are randomly placed. Going for real image on chapter one 5o a cartoonish image on chapter 2. But overall I will continue reading the story and see how it develops "

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