What is your opinion?
The Hallow Crown
"Luved it. Fast paste"
Very cool and original
"Very nice story! The plot is relatively direct and well-thought, I love the four main characters, and how they are written. The description of chronic pain at the beginning is devastatingly accurate, goodness! My only critic would be about the writing style, which seems a bit repetitive for the final chapters (a very small critic, which shouldn't make you any less eager to read it!)"
The hollow crown
"Love it ❤️"
Good plot but could be better
"I really wanted to love this because the premise is incredibly interesting. The Veilbound world, the three brothers, and the mystery surrounding Nina had so much potential that I read around 30 chapters hoping everything would come together. For me, the biggest issue was the execution. Certain phrases and emotions are repeated very often, which made many scenes lose their impact. I also found the worldbuilding and perspective shifts confusing at times, and I often felt like I was trying to catch up with the story instead of being immersed in it. My biggest struggle was Nina's development. She goes from being deeply broken and uncertain to suddenly acting like a confident queen who seems to understand everything around her. I would've loved to see that growth happen more gradually so I could experience the journey with her. That said, I genuinely think the author has a creative imagination and some fantastic ideas. This simply wasn't the right fit for me, but I hope others enjoy it more than I did, and I wish the author all the best with the rest of her stories."
