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Moving story

"As a survivor of multiple cancer scares, I can tell you you've got the writing to that going. A sad, but compelling story that needs to be widely read. Thanks. Not sure why it says 0 chapters read."

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Dance Ballerina, Dance! 🩰

"On the surface, blonde beautiful Layla appears to have it all in life. She has a loving and supportive family, loyal friends, (James and Amanda) and a remarkable gift for dance that could earn her a college scholarship. She even has a boyfriend in Owen, a fellow dancer who dotes on Layla constantly. So why is it that every night when Layla closes her eyes, she wishes that would never have to open them up ever again? The author who goes by the name, 'M' attempts to answer this question, in this thoughtful portrayal of the girl who has everything and yet her life is empty at the same time. The fact that Layla smiles so often and yet harbors suicidal thoughts are frightening. M is brave enough not to provide any easy answers though I desperately wanted them. The good news is that Layla in Chapter Four at least is in a genuinely happy mood at the moment. Knowing M though, that could change in a heartbeat. A thoughtful novel that invites you to scratch underneath the surface of the word 'happiness'. "

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a smile that costs a lot🖤

"This story stayed with me🖤 The first chapter had me falling in love with Layla's life — the warm family, the best friends, the passion for dance. It's beautiful. But then she closes her bedroom door, and she collapses. Silently. That moment is very emotional. You believed the smile. That's the whole point. There's a cancer diagnosis, a relationship under pressure, and a father who quietly taps her arm, and you realise he's known all along. These are moments written with real feeling, and they land⭐️ The heart behind this story is real. If you've ever smiled through a hard day, this one's for you.🖤"

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