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That was an intense ride

"This surprised me. It started off feeling like it was going to be a horror story like Event Horizon, then slid into an episode of Twilight Zone or Outer Limits. very thought-provoking and quite deep in how you managed to craft the conversion of humanity into bastions of thought alone, who are the wall, and the line, and the teachers to the unknown that wants to wreck everything but must be controlled as it cannot be destroyed. I am quite impressed, very well done."

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