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Amazing work mah Frendo!

"*inhales* I dont think I have the right words in my vocabulary to describe how AMAZING this book was! It has that rare style that gets you hooked and makes it so that you dont want to stop reading! Though, the cliffhangers were BRUTAL, you always came through with an amazing next chapter! I look forward to the sequel mah frendo! ♾️/10 would reccomend ❤️ (P.S for some general feedback, paragraph and sentence lengths were great, and punctuation was on point!)"

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Super

"Tolle Geschichte und Handlung mit viel Humor "

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The Argent wolf

"I loved your writing style. I like an author who throws humor in their stories. You gave little bit of everything in this story. Enjoyed reading your book cannot wait to read the next."

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Kai y Aurora!

"Simplemente brillante! Maravillosa historia! Mil felicidades a la autora por tener una imaginación impresionante! Disfruté cada momento de la lectura! Me encantaron los personajes, sobre todo unos reyes fuertes y poderosos con la suficiente humildad y humanidad para estar al lado de su pueblo! Así deberían ser todos los que son líderes! Gracias por hacerme vivir momentos increíbles en un mundo de fantasía, al que suelo recurrir para no morir con la realidad! Por favor bríndanos la segunda parte y jamás dejes de escribir. Gracias!"

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Excellent read

"Very excited to read the next book. Thoroughly enjoyed this. "

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Aurora

"Das Buch ist so schön geschrieben, ich konnte nicht aufhören zu lesen. Die Charaktere sind sehr interessant und lebendig beschrieben, man fühlt mit ihnen mit. Ich freue mich sehr auf die Fortsetzung ❤️"

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This book is really good!

"From start to finnish, I could not put book down. It is really well written. It keeps you curious for what is coming next. My favorite part i the book, was when Aurora trick them to fall headfirst into the bog. I was laughing so hard at that part. And I cant wait to read the follow up. All the highest points and stars to this author. "

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El lobo de plata

"Me gusta mucho la historia porque es divertida y muy especial con magia 🪄 y personajes fantásticos 👍❤️😊"

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Chrisie64

"This book is very well written. I have read a lot of wolf books and this is in the top 3. The story is great and I never want to put it down. The grammar, punctuation, and writing style are perfect. I would recommend this book highly. So if you enjoy reading wolf books definitely give this one a shot. "

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The Argent Wolf

"First thing that comes to mind after reading this book is “comfort read”. This is the type of book that gets you out a reading slump. This is the type of book that gets you into ready fantasy books! This is the type of book that will make you go to a cabin in the forest to read undisturbed and in perfect peace. This is a book that needs to be housed on my bookshelves so that I can read it every few months. It’s that good. Trust. "

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Roman

"Schöner Roman. Spannend und Fesselnd zugleich. Auch zwischen durch lustig und traurig. Sehr gut geschrieben. Weiter so"

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Fantastic story

"I liked the storyline and the plot of the story. Every detail is clear and making the story more understandable and interesting. From the beginning of the story, it caught my attention and my curiosity making me want to read more and to know more of what was coming next. Job well done to the writer for the great work. "

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The Argent Wolf

"Maivy, You wowed me! What can I say? I don't even know where to begin. This was one of the finest Werewolf books I have ever read on Inkitt. From start to finish, it was flawless, full of banter, aggressions, sadness, heartfelt love and much more. You are a rare excellent writer, brilliant and creative thinker. You got into my skin that I definitely want to see more of your creative writing. I was so mesmerised by your imaginations. Wyverns were super, super cool not to mention the magic from our star player Aurora. I think I only spotted a couple of typos. The story was so engaging. Half the time I was either in tears or laughing out loud. Both MMCs and FMCs were all amazing and were absolutely hilarious and all my favs and they complement one another. Even the ones mated to the original cast, they brought some unique qualities and plotting skills to aid the Alpha King. The dialogue between the characters, it's like I was watching a movie, especially the banter, the casual talks between the cast and the jokes when it's time to take a chill pill and just eat and relax, it was awesomely written. For Kieran and Aurora, it goes without saying my main star characters. I loved Aurora and her bad kick-ass fearless attitude and her magic and also Alpha King Kieran energy and their love journey. But the storyline left me on a cliff-hanger, hungry for more. But if I were to choose a few naughty ones, Kael would definitely be one of my fav for his wittiness, humour and his constant moaning if things don't go in his favour, absolutely made my day. Mara for being a strong fearless female Warlord and her problem-solving skills to every issue, which usually involves murdering someone in the process. Gee! Valerius, a true vampire villain who kills without remorse. I loved the way Aurora and her Wyverns dealt with him. I think you could turn this book into a series of books, not just two books, based on the Alpha King and Luna Queen continuation and also their Vanguard team characters. I would definitely buy the series of the books to keep in my library from a well-worthy brilliant creative thinker and writer. Thank you so much for the most wonderful read."

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So good!!!

"This was such a good read. The characters felt well developed. I love the lore and magic system. The battles were great and absolutely loved the wyverns. Im absolutely rooting for Aurora, Kieran, and the squad(wolf and otherwise). Looking forward to more reads from this author!"

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Très bien

"Parfait j ai adoré "

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Сребърният вълк-Майви

"Завладяващ сюжет! Историята те държи в напрежение от първата до последната страница. Това е книга, която не позволява да си вземеш почивка от четенето. Фантастичен хумор-има моменти, в които съм се смята с глас!"

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Genial

"J'ai beaucoup apprécié ce livre! Merci beaucoup, j'ai hâte de lire la suite!"

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Der silberne Wolf

"Tolle Geschichte,habe ich verschlungen. Vielen lieben Dank dafür ❤️"

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Love it!

"I thoroughly enjoyed the story. The character development was great, the characters are complex and real. There were plenty of funny moments that had me laughing nonstop, but also emotional moments. I cannot recommend this book enough. "

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Refreshing & intriguing!!

"I thoroughly loved this story! The setting, the atmosphere, the personalities, and the magics... Well done & I sincerely hope you have plans to continue this story!! "

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