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Wonderful Writing!

"The cover is just top notch! And so is your writing style ! Good job ! "

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The suspense is real!

"Immediately your immersed into the world and the suspense is there like the snap of a finger. Immediately there’s that twist in the gut the feeling of something not being in order. The writing is fast paced you know this situation is quite peril and it keeps you engaged. The only thing I would recommend is giving more description like her life maybe some depth in the beginning. But it’s a great start!"

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