Saving Pesut Mahakam; The Familyhood of Sea and River Dolphin

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Summary

There are only seven species of river mammal, but one had already extinct. And, there is one river dolphin in Indonesia but it is threatened with the number of less than 100. The story is about a Pesut Fish that lives in Mahakam River. He is trying to save his dying sister and their poisoned river home, a brave freshwater dolphin defies the lethal salt of the open sea to unite an archipelago-wide brotherhood of ocean dolphins in a desperate, heroic stand against industrial greed. The Mahakam River in Borneo is a dying legend, turned into a toxic trap by illegal industrial waste. Nori, a spirited young Mahakam Pesut (freshwater dolphin), witnesses his world crumble when toxic discharge kills his best friend and leaves his sister, Noni, clinging to life. Driven by a love that defies biological limits, Nori embarks on a suicidal mission: to leave his freshwater home and cross the burning, salt-filled ocean to find his legendary cousins, the sea dolphins. His odyssey across the Indonesian archipelago takes him from the skeptical leaders of Derawan Islands to the warm solidarity of Lovina and the elite warriors of Kilauan Bay. Exhausted and nearly broken, Nori is carried home by his sea brothers for a final stand. Their spectacular, combined "Rescue Dance" at the Mahakam Delta catches the world's eye via social media, forcing a national intervention to purify the river. "Saving Pesut Mahakam" is a stirring tale of environmental justice and a hero’s journey that proves that one small act of courage can save an entire ecosystem.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Light in the Murky Mahakam

The Mahakam River was once a legend that the heart of Kalimantan wore with pride. In days long past, its waters flowed with crystal clarity, serving as a vast mirror to the endless sky above. But now, this lifeline has bled into a dense, muddy brown, concealing dark secrets beneath its silent, somber surface.

Deep within these increasingly turbid waters lives a colony of rare creatures—the only river mammals in Indonesia: the Mahakam Pesut. Physically, they are the family of sea dolphins. Yet, their fate is a tragic one; the Mahakam, once their sanctuary, has slowly transformed into a death trap due to the relentless, uncontrolled tide of pollution.

Birth on the Brink of Danger

In a river nook sheltered slightly from the roaring main current, Mayang, a mother pesut, was in the throes of labor. The surrounding water rippled gently, as if the river itself were holding its breath, waiting for the arrival of new life. With one powerful surge that shattered the silence, two lives were brought into the world almost simultaneously.

The firstborn, Nori, displayed his strength immediately. His fins were sturdy, and his movements were nimble, as if he were eager to challenge the currents. Meanwhile, the second child, Noni, appeared far more serene. She floated softly beside her mother, her gaze so tranquil it seemed to bring peace to the heart of the ailing river.

Their childhood was spent in joyful play, much like any other young pesut—or any child, for that matter—who carries no burdens upon their shoulders. They explored the murky stretches of the Mahakam, occasionally drifting past floating debris. From a distance, however, there was a place where the water shimmered with clarity: the river delta, where the Mahakam met the open sea.

One day, curiosity lured them toward this delta, where the river joined the much clearer horizon of the ocean. Nori and Noni leaped through the frothing white foam, celebrating their newfound freedom.

“Children, come back here!” Mayang called out, her sonar voice firm and commanding. “Remember, you are dwellers of the river. We may play in the sea, but never stay for more than three days. The salt of this ocean will make your bodies wither and fall ill”.

Nori and his friends only laughed, continuing their pursuit through the clear water until the sun began to dip below the western horizon.

Yet, amidst their joy, a giant shadow often loomed. It was a vessel labeled Timber Factory, which routinely dumped wood shavings and a pungent, pitch-black liquid into the water.

“Stay away from that boat!” the pesut mothers warned with a quiver of dread in their voices. “If you are caught in its discharge up close, you will die instantly. Even from a distance, it will leave you sick”.

That vessel of death made its appearance like clockwork, every three months.

Tragedy in the Black Water

Six months passed. Nori and Noni had grown into inquisitive teenagers. One morning, while they were playing at the delta, the Timber Factory ship returned. A thick, dark liquid and the sharp stench of chemicals spread rapidly across the surface.

Noni and her best friend, Seni, were so lost in their games that they forgot their parents’ warnings. They swam closer toward the gargantuan ship.

“Noni! Seni! Get away from that ship! Remember what Mother said!” Nori shouted in a panic.

Noni startled and stopped immediately, but Seni, who had drifted further ahead, did not hear the cry. Suddenly, a massive pipe on the ship’s hull vomited a torrent of pitch-black fluid. Instantly, the area plunged into total darkness, swallowing Seni whole in a terrifying abyss.

It took a long time before the water cleared even slightly. Nori’s eyes widened in horror as he saw Seni’s motionless body floating on the surface, while Noni, beside him, was racked by violent, unending coughs.

Desperate and panicked, Nori and his friends dragged Seni’s body back upstream to their parents. Seni’s mother broke down in agonized sobs the moment she saw her child’s stiff form.

“Go home to your mother... tell her what has happened,” she whispered through her tears.

At home, Mayang greeted them with a face pale with grief; she had already heard of the disaster that had struck Seni and Noni. Embracing Nori and Noni, she spoke with a trembling voice.

“Long ago, before that ship came, the Mahakam was pure. We numbered more than a thousand. Since that waste began to pour in, the river has turned foul. Many have died, many more have fallen ill. Now, only a hundred of us remain... and tomorrow, there may only be ninety-nine”.

“What do you mean, Mother?” Nori asked, his voice shaking. Mayang could only weep, turning her focus to Noni, whose breathing was becoming increasingly labored.

Her words were prophetic. The next day, the news arrived: Seni had passed away. Nori stood frozen in shock, realizing his mother’s grim prediction had come true. His eyes turned toward Noni, who was still struggling with her severe cough.

“Mother, what will happen to Noni?” Nori asked, his voice laced with despair.

“There are only two paths now,” Mayang replied softly. “Either her illness worsens until she leaves us, or she recovers if the river water turns clear again. Years ago, the water cleared for a time when the ship stopped its dumping, and some of the sick ones managed to heal”.

The Action That Changed Everything

A fire of determination ignited in Nori’s heart. If that ship stopped dumping its poison, Noni would live.

He quickly gathered several friends and gave chase to the ship as it prepared to depart. They leaped and dove in front of the vessel’s bow, crying out with all their might, “Stop! No more waste!“.

But the crew only laughed heartily from the deck. To them, the dance of the pesuts was nothing more than a curious, meaningless amusement. They did not understand the language of nature’s plea. The protest ended in tragedy when one of Nori’s friends was struck by the ship’s hull and knocked unconscious, forcing them to retreat with broken spirits.

Nori asked his mother, who was a leader among the colony, “Has our kind ever tried to stop that ship?“.

“We have, my son. And the result was always the same. We were ignored,” Mayang replied, her voice heavy with disappointment.

Sorrowful, Nori swam away, eventually stopping near a human settlement along the riverbank. There, his gaze was captured by a window. Inside, a glowing “magic box”—a television—was flickering. On the screen, he saw creatures that looked almost exactly like him, though their skin was brighter. They were performing incredible feats, and humans were watching them with rapt attention.

“Dolphins,” he whispered softly, mimicking the voice from the television.

Nori watched the dolphins for a long time. They leaped through the air in pools and across the open sea. Each time they jumped, humans clapped and cheered with joy.

A flash of an idea sparked in Nori’s mind. A grand, dangerous plan began to take shape. He immediately swam back to find Noni and his mother.

Nori gazed at his sister, who was growing paler by the hour, and then turned his eyes toward the endless, beckoning horizon of the sea.