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"I would say this book as exceptional. One of the best works I have ever came across. I love Flare. Her enthusiasm, her way to find happiness in everything. I love her personality. Despite her other side (Red Flare) she has the sweetest personality and would do anything once it came to save her loved ones. And it hurt bad when Focus betrayed Flare. I honestly didn’t expect from Focus. I didn’t expect that he would try to fix his mistake in this way. It truly surprised me. Focus trying to his best to talk to Flare, apologising for his mistake, his confessions to Flare despite Flare kept hurting him back. And the fact he was trying hard but from Flare’s perspective it was the opposite was just saddd. Initially I hated the flashbacks of Focus but finally at the end, those flashbacks hit really hard. I guess it wasn’t really Focus’s fault maybe it was but all he ever taught was to be obedient. He was never shown love unlike Flare was shown by her Parents. He was torn by love and loyalty but at last he chose love. And when he finally said the words I love you to Flare was the best moment. He finally did fix his mistake but it almost cost him his life. And now Flare is back and I know that she will take revenge for Focus that they will defeat Infinity. Infinity unlike Aegis is different. Aegis wanted control. He didn’t want opposition. He wanted loyalty and respect without ever doing the same. While Infinity is different. He sees himself as everyone below him.. he wants power but he is using it in the wrong way. He tries to emotionally blackmail people like he did with Rime and Hollow But he is still better than Aegies I hope Flare with all others manages to bring Infinity down especially for Focus Once again, GREAT WORK 🤌🏻👏🏻"

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Review part Infinity

"Power Surge: Season Three, Part One doesn’t just throw you into the action — it straps you in and refuses to let go. If you live for high-stakes fights, powers clashing, and that constant “what happens next” tension, this season is built for you. But what makes it unforgettable isn’t just the action. It’s the trauma that bleeds through every episode, mostly in the form of flashbacks that hit harder than any punch. I still can’t decide whose past hurt the most. Honestly, none of them deserved what they went through. And then there’s Flare. Or Red Flare. She insists they’re the same person, and she’s right. What she wants is simple and terrifying: to burn the world. To everyone else she’s a monster, and I get why. No one sees the scars under the fire. Even when they do catch a glimpse of her past, it doesn’t change anything for them. She’s already been labeled. But Abdo, the way you wrote her — you won me over. Flare is layered in the best way. Yes, she’s destruction incarnate. But she’s also alive in a way that’s addictive to watch. The way her eyes light up mid-battle. The way she’s so full of life even when she’s talking about burning everything down. That contradiction is what makes her feel real. It makes her deeper than “villain” or “hero.” She’s both, and neither. She was too young to lose her parents. Too young to carry that weight. And then the worst part: the memory that she was the one who burned them. That realization should’ve stayed buried. Infinity, I know you thought it would make her stronger, but what you did to her was cruel. She remembers now, and that memory is eating her alive. Then there’s Focus. God, I feel for him, even if I don’t say it out loud. He was just a kid when Aegis got their hands on him. Their “training” wasn’t training at all — it was abuse, plain and simple. So broken, so calculated, that it makes me angry every time I think about it. He grew up believing Aegis was the world. That there was nothing outside it. No other way to live. And then Flare walked in. For the first time, Focus saw something beyond Aegis. He saw warmth. He saw choice. He was so starved for affection that he grabbed the first love offered to him, and I don’t blame him for that. It made sense. What didn’t make sense was how he left her when she needed him most. I think he didn’t even understand his own power yet. He was still mentally chained to Aegis. But he didn’t stay there. He fought. He fought for himself, for his own identity. He fought for Flare. He stood up to Infinity and actually made him pause. That growth changed everything for me. Despite all my frustration with him, Focus is lovable. I still don’t like him, not fully, but I respect him now. And the truth is, Focus never wanted evil. He never had good options. Aegis gave him survival, Flare gave him freedom, and he had to choose between them with no guidebook. But everything he’s done since that choice has built his aura back up. He’s not just Aegis’s weapon anymore. Then there’s Infinity. He’s the hardest one to pin down. His present is just a scarred version of his past, and you can see it in every decision he makes. I don’t think his worldview is wrong, actually. Twisted, maybe, but not wrong. Compared to what Aegis wants — control, erasure, obedience — Infinity’s vision at least allows for chaos, for choice, for fire. Then we have Infinity’s followers, I don’t like them both especially Rime. Reason: Unknown. But the moment that broke me was when Focus finally faced Flare. Abdo, you nailed that scene. Their fight wasn’t just powers clashing. It was two broken people speaking completely different languages. The contrast between Focus’s POV and Flare’s POV gave me chills. He saw a girl he loved. She saw a world that needed to burn. Red Flare was seconds away from ending everything. And Focus stopped her. Not with force. Not with strategy. He said it: “I love you.” Like, wow. Focus has never been good with words. He ruins every emotional moment he tries to create. But this time, thank God, he got it right. Three words, and the whole world held its breath. The side characters added depth to the series as well. All of them decided to fight Cromwell and I respect this decision quite a lot. I live for the details. And the details between Focus and Flare are worth dying for. It was these moments that truly connected with the readers. The bonus episode was hilarious except for a few jokes. I love that aura points joke so much! (Still the best joke is Focus’s fake death.) Your writing has improved a lot, Abdo. Keep up the great work. Can’t wait for the finale!"

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